Because Of You (Short Poem #2)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The reasons of multiple reasons :)

The reason I'm here, is because of you
The problems I had, never was from you
That smile on my face, you made it
The person who I am, you prayed for it
All because of you, I have relief
You made me cold when I felt the heat
Of the fire of my anger and all the other stuff
You set free my soul and as formy problems, you came to cuff
What I'm trying to say, is we have good with us two
For the joy and pleasure in my life, Its all because of you

Copyright © 2012 by Acie Anderson




Submitted: March 29, 2012

© Copyright 2022 Acie Anderson. All rights reserved.

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xxxLynnxxx

I like this!! (: It's cute! (: Please go check out my "novel'! It's not done yet, but I have a lot of it up! Thank you! (:
#YouAreAmazing

Thu, March 29th, 2012 9:34pm

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Thank you very much and will do :)

Thu, March 29th, 2012 3:48pm

5Forever23His10Fan

I love this :) I think it is beautiful... you are such an amazing writer... Your way with words are just phenomenal... it is just a touching poem... GREAT JOB!!! :)

Fri, March 30th, 2012 4:49am

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Thank you very much :)

Thu, March 29th, 2012 11:37pm

onlyinred

Hey! Very good, you are as good as your friend and you claim to be! I don't know if you meant this in the flow of your poem when you say 'the problems I had, never 'was' from you', It could be 'the 'problem' I had, never was from you' or 'the problems I had, never 'were' from you'. I don't know, but it flowed really good and it is a really sweet poem! Any girl would really appreciate it, no matter the grammar! :> Great job, you are an amazing poet, and I'm glad you recognize your strengths as a writer because that's important, to have confidence in the quality of your work and not only do you, but your friend also has confidence in it! That's great! loved this poem! :)

Fri, March 30th, 2012 3:03pm

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Thank you very much :) and yeah I meant to do that but thank you very much for pointing that out to me :) but again... thanks for the wonderful comment and reading this poem! :)

Fri, March 30th, 2012 8:35am

nathanmarc12

Hmm. I love this a lot! Again I love how it rhymes but more importantly, I find this really sweet and touching. The song by Kelly Clarkson is all about blaming her ex, but here you are loving your current one. Great job! :)

Sun, April 1st, 2012 12:47pm

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Well thank you very much :)

Sun, April 1st, 2012 8:40am

Christian Taylor

Excellent work with this poem...short and sweet! Good pick of a title; Kelly Clarkson has a great song with the same name, but like what the previous comment said; its all about blaming her ex, but here you are loving your current one.

Excellent work! XD

Sun, April 1st, 2012 4:01pm

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Well thank you very much :) and yes, I am familiar with that song.. Great song actually :) but thank you again for reading and commenting :)

Sun, April 1st, 2012 10:28am

ASPlayboyVinny

Interesting. One of the best poems I've seen on this website. I look forward to seeing more of your writings.

Mon, April 9th, 2012 5:48pm

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Well thank you very much :)

Mon, April 9th, 2012 10:57am

Pinkygirl101

Do you hear that? It's my heart fluttering within my chest! Really lovely man, your amazing!
"5Forever23His10Fan" rocomended your work to me and I am so glad that they did! You have a talent. Never stop bro...never stop!

Fri, April 27th, 2012 12:46pm

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Well thank you very much and yes, she is my girlfriend/promoter and no, I will never stop :)

Fri, April 27th, 2012 12:44pm

StrangeMind

This is a really sweet poem! It flows well, and you capture the idea of love very well in this poem :) Great work!

Sat, April 28th, 2012 7:23pm

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Thank you very much :)

Sat, April 28th, 2012 2:59pm

yeya620

this poem awsooooooooooooooooooooome!

Thu, May 3rd, 2012 2:38am

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Thank you very much :)

Wed, May 2nd, 2012 7:41pm

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