Love Endures

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Love conquers all, even death!

A handsome prince,

A beautiful maiden,

In a magnificent kingdom,

Do they lie,

One was betroved,

The other too,

For years ago,

They both were loved,

When she screamed,

He would be her rescuer,

When she cried,

He would be her mourner,

For as he slew both beast and fowl,

An unseen enemy came towards the bow,

One night, when he was old and gray,

It stole his breath upon the place he lay,

She found him next morn with tears in her eyes,

And pressed her lips against his,

Just one last time,

At his funeral she wept,

But despair consumed,

She fell in the pit,

Into the earth brew,

Each year passes, their corpses rot,

But their love ever grows,

For even death cannot stop its one true foe.

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Submitted: August 13, 2008

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Nomurcee187

Good Job! Did you intentionally spell wept as wepped and upon as apon? I knew what you were saying, unfortunately though, I am anal when it comes to spelling--one of my character defects. Anyway, you are expanding your range and for this you should be proud!!

Wed, August 13th, 2008 4:20pm

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Glad you liked it, and thanks for the spelling tips, that's on thing I need lots of work on.

Wed, August 13th, 2008 9:28am

Midnight Dreamer

I ♥ it!

You write so well

Wed, August 13th, 2008 6:36pm

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Thanks, your writing is great too.

Wed, August 13th, 2008 12:00pm

noonesperfection

Your a very good writer :)

Fri, August 22nd, 2008 8:03pm

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thx!

Sun, August 24th, 2008 2:05pm

Goldenglow

aww, that was very sweet indeed!
The words were very nicely put together!! LLOOVVVEEDD IITT!!

Mon, September 29th, 2008 10:05pm

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Sweet, thx

Mon, September 29th, 2008 3:39pm

Haylieee Hamiltonnn

wow. that was great. keep it up! i look forward to more:)

Sun, November 30th, 2008 4:06pm

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thx.

Tue, December 2nd, 2008 3:59pm

Ethyn

I feel that many people argue about the 'til death do you part' saying. I think that there is no death do you part, not as long as you can love the ones you love most not till death, but for all eternity. This poem reminded me of that. Great word usage.

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 7:17pm

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thx

Mon, January 5th, 2009 2:59pm

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