Teenage Dream???

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

A very unpopular girl named gabby is taken back by a very popular guy, Ben, at the beach. When she starts to have day dreams/fantasies about him (not sex fantasies!! well we'll see) Okay i dont know where this story is going, i need a little guidence with this one. Pretty personal this one for me to write if you know what i mean. Please enjoy and let me know how i can improve!

Chapter 1 (v.1) - Teenage Dream???

Submitted: October 23, 2012

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Submitted: October 23, 2012



You know how you have these kind of day dreams/fantasy about someone you will never see or meet again? Like a hot guy/girl at the beach, shops, park, or wherever?

That's happened to me a lot since I started to notice other people, if you know what I mean. Or when I wished that someone would love me. Lame right? or corny? Or whatever you prefer.

My name is Gabrielle Murphy, Gabby for short. I'm not a very pretty girl, just average I guess, if you want. I have short black hair, white skin, hazel eyes, a round face, not a thin girl (no where near thin), I'm seventeen almost eighteen. I’m also bi.

That's a little bit about me. I wont go into full depth about me, I'm sure that would bore you to tears! But throughout this story I may explain little sections of things, or I may not go into any detail.


Here I am sitting at the beach, writing a story in my book, while watching the people around me play in the water and sand.

Sitting here alone - yes I do have friends, just want to be alone right now...

My thoughts are cut off when I hear a girl scream, while others a giggling. I look towards the noise, so does most of the people on the beach, to find a group of the popular kids.... btw it isn’t a big beach.
You know the type, unless you are the type? (if you are I'm sorry!) There were two girls with this group, who are to thin to believe, wearing bikini that I wouldn’t think even class as a bikini cause their so small, who are too pretty to be fair, and so on. There was also guys with this group, three guys.

One of the boys had pushed a girl into the water.

I roll my eyes – as well as the rest of the beach goers - and go back to my writing. Almost finish this page I’m on when I notice the popular kids walk past me and most of them run straight to the water. I just focus more on my writing.

When I see a pair of tanned feet in front of me, I look up to see the boy with the black hair, lightly tanned skin, piercing blue eyes framed by dark eyelashes, sightly muscled,tall, nice smile...

Umm? Yes?' I whispered.

I know this is gonna sound odd, but I was wondering if you could look after mine and my friends things while we're in the water...?”
“Ahh, I dunno... I might be leaving soon...” LIE! I was gonna be here for the next few hours, at least.

Oh, ummm,” he looked disappointed, “Just for a little while, please?”
I was shocked for to reasons. One, he asked and TWO he said please!

Ahh, sure, just don’t be to long...”
“Thanks!” He smiled a big smile that made me feel warm inside. What the hell is going on?!?
He placed all their stuff on the ground beside me and started to walk away, I was getting ready to go back to my writing when he turned back.

Hey, I forgot to ask, what’s your name?”
“Gabby. You?”
“Ben.” Was all he said before he went to play with his friends in the water.

For the next hour and a half, I spent trying to get engrossed in my story again, but failed and failed. All I could think about – well hoped – that Ben would come up here and kiss me or something! Ask me out or even just talk with me, get to know me. He didn’t judge, well not that I could see, then I had my doubts, what if he was only being nice cause he wanted me to look after this stuff.

It doesn’t matter! I scolded myself.

Well that’s what I told myself anyway....

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