In the sky I see diamonds

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

just something I'd like to share


In the sky I see diamonds

that sparkle with joy.

They move and they circle,

the sky is thier toy.


They have no absolute way that they move

no constant,

no rhyme, no rhythm, no groove.

They paint the sky

a wonderous beauty

I wish I could share

the feel they give to me.


I stare at them falling into a trance

I succumb to a peaceful, luminous romance.


What they do to me can-not be fully explained

they are what they are

unto me they remain.


Can anyone see them?

I wish I could share,

the beauty at which

I so often stare?

Submitted: August 08, 2007

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Loved this! I like to think of my parents as stars and often find myself staring up at the night sky.Somehow makes me feel better as I kind of think they're still with me that way! Silly huh?! Beautifully written! Loved the first verse.

Wed, August 8th, 2007 11:45pm


not silly at all, they are with you. especially when ever you think of them. they are drawn to us through thought and emotion. thankyou. I am happy that you enjoyed this. :)

Wed, August 8th, 2007 6:45pm


Your words drift me away.
very nice images, very nice

Thu, August 9th, 2007 1:19am


alright! don't drift too far (smile) thanks Devilrod

Wed, August 8th, 2007 6:47pm


i like your style beautifully written

Thu, August 9th, 2007 2:07am


thankyou so much. I like yours too :)

Wed, August 8th, 2007 8:36pm


Glad you shared it--it's very pretty ! something about the night sky just makes you want to write poetry !

Thu, August 9th, 2007 2:55pm


thankyou but I'm gonna share something: I see them during the day. although I am not the only one, I have only met one other person who sees them also. I believe it is the light essence from the largest atoms, they are tiny pin points that move and swirl in all different directions and at certain times depending on how one looks they appear to sparkle in the sky. when I first began to see them my family thought, (it must be the medication) though I have been off meds for months and they are still there. I believe that my vibrational state was raised through meditation, because there ae many other energys I see also that I never did before. remember, just because you can't see something doesn't mean it's not there (smile) hey have a great day, it's great talking with you :)

Thu, August 9th, 2007 8:18am

half chewed pen

I see Them ..
The only way I can descibe them is when you get a head rush and little explosions of nothing dot about your head .
when I am stoned they apear as a green a red flashing neon lattis with geometric form..when I am straight they shimmer in crystal white like sun flakes dancing on a lake ..
I can trance the sensation back to when i was a child and had No reference of drugs!
I like to beleive that like bugs that see our world through different senses,our eyes only pick out the simlper forms of the sustance of creation ..and that really creation is made up of these little sparks and they are present always ..A bit like the northern lights that are only visible in the northern hemosphere. yet the cause happens all over the planet but we only perceive/see blue hues.

Sat, August 25th, 2007 1:20pm


oh my gosh, I know of only one other person who sees these.
why do you think we can see these? there are so many questions. I believe it is like medicine for me, and I also think that I recieve something from it. enlightened ones see much much more and are able to work miracles with the universal energys. they are actually able to break down the molecular structure of the atoms (which are energy and information) and restructure them with new info. I myself can make no ryhme or reason of them as yet. and I suppose you like the other person I know has been seeing them since childhood and just except them. I don't know why I am so curious, probably cause they are so new to me? it is so good to find another who sees what I see. keep on seein' (smile)
have a great day :)

Sat, August 25th, 2007 11:14am



Great job. It always helps to have someone with whom we can share our peak experiences. Most especially spectacular natural events, really funny moments and major milestones.

For me it is the unrehearsed and hilarious events which can take place when others are just being themselves and have no idea how they are creating a most mirthful moment in the mind of another. That person being alone in their appreciation of the moment. Not being able to show or share their emotion with anyone.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sun, September 2nd, 2007 6:47am


oh, how wonderful, to enjoy people so. it makes life taste so much better. it is a totaly unselfish and loving thing that you embrace those moments of people and weather they know it or not it adds to there energy the emotion of Joy!
bless you Ed and have a beautiful day :)

Sun, September 2nd, 2007 8:24am

Constantinos Grigoriadis

Youth is happy because it has the capacity to see beauty. Anyone who keeps the ability to see beauty never grows old.
Franz Kafka


Sun, October 7th, 2007 11:08am


Yes, I believe that is true, we will never grow old. maybe you have something there. It would be nice to be able to teach others to see beauty (smile)..thankyou Constantinos

Sun, October 7th, 2007 9:32am


Yes Katie, u r a part of their world sweet heart because u have observed them so closely ..........
i wish i could share as well with you these beauties , these diamonds...scattered....

Sun, May 25th, 2008 3:31am


do you see them? Juliets (mum55) nephew Paul (half_chewed_pen) sees them too. I know someone else who sees them, and I have sinse read about them. someone calls them 'orgone' well that name does not do them justice LOL!
they are beauty undiscribable!
haha thanks Pratibha. haha speaking of Juliet, I wonder how she is doing?
ok, the coffee is wearing off, going to take the cats out get some fresh air and come and lots more love...katie :)

Sun, May 25th, 2008 6:08am

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