This is about my ex-step-dad lol he was a real jerk and was mentally abusive...

You've taken away,

all my memories...

Crushed my sanctuary right infront of me.

All your lies now crowd my mind

All the pain crowds my joy.

You destroyed my life,

and everyone in it

including me.

The pain youve caused...

It's un bearable!

You laugh at my pain

and called false judjgement...

I hate you for it

no longer a family...

Keep your last name...

its unwanted...


Submitted: May 29, 2008

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sunset293

Nice

Fri, May 30th, 2008 12:01am

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lol thanks ^-^

Thu, May 29th, 2008 5:25pm

emosakuraisbrokenhearted1

awww Kelseyy thats goodd;
i likee it lovee.!(:

Fri, May 30th, 2008 12:08am

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lol thanks ^-^

Thu, May 29th, 2008 5:27pm

NocturnalMuse

Omg..Kels. This was beautiful!
Can't wait to read more.
I swear if you even think about dropping writing again I shall feed you to Joel's rabid Koala's!
lmao
jk I wouldnt do that.
You meh sis.
=)
Keep it up!
Please dont stop writing again.
Love you!
~mandy

Fri, May 30th, 2008 12:09am

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lol thanks mandy! ^-^ lol and im gonna try not to dropwriting again lol

Thu, May 29th, 2008 5:28pm

Avanicro

wow that was great so meaning full

Sat, July 5th, 2008 6:54pm

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lol thanks ^^

Sat, July 5th, 2008 12:52pm

GiGi Joy

i have a mentally abusive stepdad and step mom ^^; so i can relate...quite well with this poem...great job ^^

Fri, July 25th, 2008 3:56am

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lol thank you ^^ and im sorry to hear about that... luckily the abusive one was only my ex-step-dad person thing lol but we got away lol i only wish the best of luck to you...

Wed, September 3rd, 2008 6:40pm

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