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The dame was no doubt looking for trouble. It's an old cliche, I know, that's just how I saw it. I should’ve walked away then, but she held me entranced with her sinuous motions. What choice did I have but to accept her invitation and jump in?

And may the lord forgive me for saying this, but the fall never tasted so sweet.

Submitted: June 07, 2007

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Interesting change in perspective here.

Sat, December 29th, 2007 10:25am

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