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The shuttle eased onto the landing strip and for a brief moment, I thought we were still airborne. I realized it was the motion of the waves, seesawing in a rhythmic lull.

Nyu produced a small bottle. “This will help.”

I shook my head. “I’ll be alright. Thanks.”

I closed my eyes and let myself drift in the undulating displacements of the sea. On the surface of this planet, I was no longer master of my body. I belonged to the g-forces that dragged me down in a primordial spiral of possession. Gravity, I thought, was the ultimate fall.

Submitted: June 03, 2008

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Classy Peach

I'm lost!
Are they on earth?

Gravity IS the ultimate fall as I peer down at my body.
sigh. bigger sigh.

Are they wearing big michelan man suits? that just is what I saw here.

outstanding writing is what i expect of you now and you never fail me. love every crazy chapter.

Thu, June 5th, 2008 12:36am


No worries, I'm confused too. These crazy characters keep jumping around and it's hard to get a hold of them. It feels like they're taking me for a ride. =)

Wed, June 4th, 2008 11:52pm

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