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::Aleister::


The sound of splashing water woke me up, and my fingers reflexively slid around my staff.

“Water is so delightful.”

Jazmine stood in the middle of the stream, her diaphanous gown raised just above her ankles. She kicked the water and droplets shimmered across the air.

“Whenever Rachel goes away on business, she puts me in self-preservation mode. Just in case she doesn’t come back, then I’ll be free to carry out her last instructions.”

She waded across the water and knelt beside me.

“Do tell,” I said.

“I cannot.”

“Why not?”

You are a variable in the equation.”


Submitted: June 24, 2008

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Classy Peach

Ouch.

I DO love these small chapters...but it's almost as if each chapter is a different story that has nothing to do with the last? DOesn't matter...lovin your writing.

Fri, June 27th, 2008 5:03am

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I'm happy you like my writing in spite of its fragmentary nature. =)

Sat, June 28th, 2008 11:58pm

Classy Peach

I wished you wrote one of these everyday. Just like this one.

Fri, June 27th, 2008 5:04am

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Thanks for your encouraging comments. I will try to post more frequently so the story feels more coherent. =)

Sun, June 29th, 2008 12:01am

AllisonHanks

it's all connected. each chapter is but a piece of the puzzle. i'm excited to complete it's picture...

Thu, January 15th, 2009 4:36pm

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There's a bit of improvisation, so it keeps on surprising me as well.

Thu, January 15th, 2009 3:17pm

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