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The island receded in the distance, already seeming like a dream.

“The match is almost flawless,” said Nyu looking at the profiles. “Right down to the neurological level. Perhaps the moders work a little too well. How many did you take?”

“All of them,” I told her. “Didn’t want room for any mistakes.”

“Uncanny. I’m surprised it didn’t raise any red flags.”

As we approached the waiting shuttle, I reached into my pocket and clasped the three little capsules. Casually, I leaned against the side of the boat and dropped them in the water.

Submitted: December 22, 2008

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Classy Peach

Dirty devil, lying to a girl!
I'd laugh if they exploded in the water and the girl knew you were lying!

Now, AQ, is it just me or is this have erotic undertones? Why does it feel "sexy"?

Tue, December 23rd, 2008 12:31am


Sexy, I like that description. =)

Mon, December 22nd, 2008 11:10pm


sexy for sure! i liked the "capsules" as i'm not totally sure what they're about. very intriguing.

Thu, January 15th, 2009 6:00pm


Lol! Sometimes, the story comes out more ambiguous than I intended. I'm enjoying your comments.

Thu, January 15th, 2009 3:23pm

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