Chapter 2:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 168
Comments: 4



Victoria lay her head against the tub, and closed her tired blue eyes. She relaxed as the bubbles gently burst against her pale white skin. The sweet smell of lilac, from the scented candles filled the room, as she drifted off to sleep.

She found herself walking down a narrow trail. The sounds of birds singing, and the aroma of the magnolia trees, made her walk very pleasant. As she walks, she remembers all the fun, she and her best friend Destiny used to have swimming in the stream, at the end of the trail.

Summers got pretty hot in Virginia, and when school was out for summer break, all the area teens would gather at the stream to swim, and just cool down from the heat.

Victoria was sixteen, but was well developed for her age. All the guys would make eyes at her, and so would their girlfriends.She knew what the guys would say about her, but it didn't bother her at all. She was a virgin, and damn proud of it.

The only thing that really hurt her, was the jealousy some of the guys girlfriends had for her. Their whispers of calling her a slut, cut like a knife. But she knew it wasn't true, so she would just blow it off.

There was one girl though, that just wouldn't let it go.. Cassie Shaviers. A rich little spoiled brat. Who everyone knew very well to be a whore. Victoria couldn't stand her, and avoided her as much as possible. But here she was, arm in arm with Jason. Sneering at Victoria, while Jason was checking her out.

Victoria watched, as his eyes made their way down her slender body. Finally making their way back to her eyes, he realized he was being noticed, not just by Victoria, but by his girlfriend Cassie too.

Cassie squinched her green eyes, and gave Victoria a look that would freeze the water, as she kicked Jason on the shin.

" Ouch! " He yelped, holding his leg. He looks at Victoria with pain in his eyes, and a bright red face.

" Lets go! " Cassie snapped. " Too much trash around here! " She sneered, looking at Victoria.

" Watch your mouth! " Destiny told her, as Victoria held her back from whipping her ass. " Are you going to just let her talk to you like that? " She told her mad as hell.

" Let it go! " She told Destiny, " Shes not worth it."

As Cassie flipped her hair, and turned to leave, Jason apologizes for her insults. He smiled at Victoria, and was gone.

Victoria wakes up freezing, " How long have i been asleep! " She said out loud. Her bath was freezing cold, as she dried off, dressed, and ran for the warmth of her bed. She pulled the comforter over her shoulders, as she realized the name Jason Dumas.

" Thats it! " She thought. Jason Dumas, its him. Thats where i know him from. But why is he in New York? Imagine that! " She couldn't wait to see what he looked like now. Back then he was really hot! But more importantly, Victoria wanted to meet the woman, he was going to marry...

Submitted: May 31, 2009

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Ooh! This was a great chapter! I wonder who his fiance is! I can't wait to find out! Please update soon!

Keep me posted!


Sun, May 31st, 2009 3:00pm


Thank you shortie, i will.

Angellynn :D

Sun, May 31st, 2009 8:14am


Hmm...high school classmates...Interesting. Can't wait to find out who he's marrying.
Keep me updated!

Sun, May 31st, 2009 10:23pm


Thanks! I will..

Angellynn :D

Sun, May 31st, 2009 5:22pm


omg if he is marrying that bitch cassie then i am going to shoot someone!!!! jason seemed like a nice guy even if he was ogling her. cassie seemed so rude though. id totally put her in her place if i were victoria!! awesome chapter!! :D

Tue, June 2nd, 2009 3:39am


Thanks again! I agree with you totally!

Angellynn :)

Mon, June 1st, 2009 9:45pm


uh-oh!! HAHA...I'm all giddy and happy inside! That was so cute! I'm off to read the next chapter!!

Thu, June 4th, 2009 7:15pm


Thats what everyone says lol> They dont want it to be Destiny either. We shall see!

Angellynn :D

Thu, June 4th, 2009 1:53pm

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