Chapter 5:

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 4



Victoria could't keep her mind on her work, so she decided to take a few hours away from Sweet Confections. She instructed her bakers to call her, if a problem should arise.

She drives to the beach, and walks barefoot along the seaside. The cool sand felt so good between her toes, as she thought about Jason. Thinking back to school, he always seemed to be a really nice guy. He just had one problem, he could never pick the right girlfriends.

There was a time Victoria would have gladly dated him, but he was always surrounded by bimbos. Kristy didn't seem like a bimbo to her, but there was something wrong with their relationship. Victoria could sense it. If Jason loved her, he wouldn't have made eyes at her.

Remembering the time it was between classes, Victoria was getting a book from her locker. Suddenly someone brushes up against her, it was Jason. He smiled, and asked her if he could help her with her books. " I only have one book," she laughed.

" Guess its just an excuse to talk to you," he laughed.

" Now see", she thought to herself, as she continued to walk the beach. Thats the wonderful laugh i remember." Giggling to herself.

" I wonder if Kristy knows how lucky she is," as Victoria starts back to her car.

When she approached the car, there was someone standing next to it. Victorias eyes grew big, when she realized it was Kristy.

" Kritsy! " Victoria said surprised, putting her shoes back on. " What are you doing here? "

Kristy had a hurtful look on her face, yet seemed fake to Victoria. " Whats going on? Do you need to change your order again? " She asked her disappointed.

" No, the order is fine, " she looked at Victoria, with worried eyes. " I want to talk to you about Jason. "

They took a seat on a bench, overlooking the water, Then Kristy ask her a question, as she looked in Victorias eyes.

" Have you ever had sex with Jason? " She teared up. " What i mean is, have you ever had a relationship with him? "

" No! Never! " Victoria answered angerily. " It is'nt any of your business, if i had." Standing up, she was offended by her question. " I haven't seen Jason in years, why are you asking me this? " Victoria wanted to know. " Your out of line, and i dont appreciate your accusations."

" I had to know, " Kristy told her, " We're getting married in a few days. Call me jealous, i dont care. I know what a womanizer he was in school, " she sneered, as shegot in her car, and drove away.

Submitted: June 05, 2009

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I'm not liking his wife-to-be. Maybe she should realize that if she is so insecure then she really shouldn't marry the guy...

HAHA...I liked this chapter though! It was so cute! I can't wait for more...Update soon

Sat, June 6th, 2009 3:20am


Thank you dibs! I will..

Angellynn :D

Fri, June 5th, 2009 8:27pm


Hmm...Kristy is really insecure! That was really rude! And why is Jason marrying her? I can't wait to read more!

Well done!


Sat, June 6th, 2009 6:29pm


Thank you. Yes she is.. Wonder why! Lol!

Angellynn :)

Sat, June 6th, 2009 2:36pm


I just read all five chapters and am loving it so far! I really don't like Jason's fiancee, she seems either really insecure or incredibly rude. Maybe both...haha!

Please let me know when you update! :)

Sat, June 6th, 2009 8:06pm


I will ! Thanks for reading!

Angellynn :)

Sat, June 6th, 2009 2:37pm


i really dont like kristy. geez, youre marrying the man, you should at least trst that he wouldnt cheat on you. he'll just break the engagement and get together with victoria, like he should, and they'll get married and have baby jasons!!!!! really awesome chapter i totally love this!! :D

Sun, June 14th, 2009 12:31am


So glad your getting into this. I like that!

Angellynn :D

Sat, June 13th, 2009 5:53pm

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