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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

it will dark your life

It keeps creeping so close to me.

An illusion that shattered to pieces with my sins.

Am l satan who deludes people from the right path.

Am I a person who suffers from his shame

clutching to my reminiscence.

Erasing every hole till there is no place for hope.

At leastI settle my self to ask for repentance.


Submitted: January 22, 2012

© Copyright 2022 Areen Abukishek . All rights reserved.

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XxlulucrossxX

Lol, the title caught my eye XDDDD Anywho~ NICE POEM! Very flowing! ;)

Sun, January 22nd, 2012 5:13pm

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thank you for reading my poem

Wed, February 29th, 2012 1:54pm

Areen Abukishek

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 2:07am

blackstar07

firs of all the picture is my profile picture .. and about the poem nice one ! love your poem :)

Mon, March 19th, 2012 11:24pm

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thank you

Tue, March 20th, 2012 1:10am

Areen Abukishek

please read

Tue, March 20th, 2012 9:44am

chris collins

very nice it flows well

Tue, March 20th, 2012 3:29pm

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thank you

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 3:07am

Pharaoh888

Interesting poem, and interesting title

Sun, April 1st, 2012 6:53pm

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thanks

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:48pm

yuyusuff

nice poem, i liked it.

Sun, April 1st, 2012 6:55pm

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thanks

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:48pm

Chris Gerard

Interesting to say the least. Dark doesn't come near to describing it. Are you male or female, victim or predator? Afraid, ashamed? Both? (Like the rest of us). Probably one of the most powerful pieces of work on Booksie. :O.

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 10:49am

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thanks

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 6:40am

denya9511

this was amazing! i like it!

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 5:38pm

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thanks

Wed, April 4th, 2012 6:09am

Peach Love

Great poem, seems to flow very nice and you use some great poetic words!

Wed, June 19th, 2013 10:28pm

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Thanks

Tue, June 25th, 2013 1:19am

Natasha Monique

Excellent read! You did a wonderful job of capturing the mood of darkened sins.

Mon, December 14th, 2015 3:11pm

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thank you for reading it

Thu, December 17th, 2015 1:11pm

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