so what if

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

so what if....

So What If

what if the whole world collapse

what if our rights have been taken a way

what if we live in agony

what if we dont have home to embrace

what if we are falling apart

what if we are having just a nightmare

what are we going to do

to live for the next seventy years

what if.................................


Submitted: March 20, 2012

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Princess21

Nice one. I like the the part "what if we are having just a nightmare".

Tue, March 20th, 2012 1:06pm

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thank you

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 3:07am

Yume chan

Mmmm a big what if? What if I didn't read this poem? Mmm lol its a kwl poem, reminds me of the movie, What if? Was very good movie jst like this poem^^ good job

Wed, March 21st, 2012 10:35am

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thank you

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 3:06am

Don George

Good questions. Hope we don't have to find out. :-)

Wed, March 21st, 2012 2:53pm

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thank you

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 3:04am

desjane1

This is really good! A lot of questions I have thought myself to be honest. Great poem!

~Kaitlynn.

Sun, April 1st, 2012 4:44pm

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thanks

Sun, April 1st, 2012 10:07am

Pharaoh888

This poem tells it all! A very important question, an unclear answer, seriously! What if...

Hehe, Veyr nice poem, I like it ^_^

Sun, April 1st, 2012 6:38pm

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thanks

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:50pm

yuyusuff

what if...
hmmm now you got me all thinking about stuff

Sun, April 1st, 2012 7:00pm

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thanks

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:47pm

Chris Gerard

It's easy to say 'que sera, sera', easy to say 'hope and pray'. Not so easy when you're in the middle of the nightmare. Still, we have to hope and pray, and do whatever we can to help each other through, however little it is. ???? ???? ??? (hope that comes out right!)

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 10:42am

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thanks

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 6:42am

amnehquti

Chris you speak arabic

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 8:17pm

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...........

Thu, April 5th, 2012 2:02am

Deathstix

Chris speaks Arabic? I never knew...(sorry, I am looking at the other comment you got for this spectacular poem). Anyways, I very much liked this. Gut job.

Wed, April 18th, 2012 1:53am

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thanks

Wed, April 18th, 2012 6:32am

denya9511

I LIKES IT!!!!!

Sun, May 13th, 2012 6:23pm

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thanks

Mon, May 14th, 2012 6:42am

blackstar07

i also think about that what if we died tomorrow who knows what would happened

Mon, December 10th, 2012 10:04am

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thanks

Wed, December 19th, 2012 7:44am

ashi17

Good questions raising in poetess's mind, sweet and lovely poem !

Sat, January 12th, 2013 7:25pm

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thank you

Wed, January 16th, 2013 1:56am

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