So What If
what if the whole world collapse
what if our rights have been taken a way
what if we live in agony
what if we dont have home to embrace
what if we are falling apart
what if we are having just a nightmare
what are we going to do
to live for the next seventy years
what if.................................
Submitted: March 20, 2012
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Mmmm a big what if? What if I didn't read this poem? Mmm lol its a kwl poem, reminds me of the movie, What if? Was very good movie jst like this poem^^ good job
Wed, March 21st, 2012 10:35am
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Thu, March 22nd, 2012 3:06am
Good questions. Hope we don't have to find out. :-)
Wed, March 21st, 2012 2:53pm
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Thu, March 22nd, 2012 3:04am
This is really good! A lot of questions I have thought myself to be honest. Great poem!
~Kaitlynn.
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Sun, April 1st, 2012 10:07am
This poem tells it all! A very important question, an unclear answer, seriously! What if...
Hehe, Veyr nice poem, I like it ^_^
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Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:50pm
what if...
hmmm now you got me all thinking about stuff
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Mon, April 2nd, 2012 11:47pm
It's easy to say 'que sera, sera', easy to say 'hope and pray'. Not so easy when you're in the middle of the nightmare. Still, we have to hope and pray, and do whatever we can to help each other through, however little it is. ???? ???? ??? (hope that comes out right!)
Tue, April 3rd, 2012 10:42am
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Tue, April 3rd, 2012 6:42am
Chris you speak arabic
Tue, April 3rd, 2012 8:17pm
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Thu, April 5th, 2012 2:02am
Chris speaks Arabic? I never knew...(sorry, I am looking at the other comment you got for this spectacular poem). Anyways, I very much liked this. Gut job.
Wed, April 18th, 2012 1:53am
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Wed, April 18th, 2012 6:32am
I LIKES IT!!!!!
Sun, May 13th, 2012 6:23pm
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Mon, May 14th, 2012 6:42am
i also think about that what if we died tomorrow who knows what would happened
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Wed, December 19th, 2012 7:44am
Good questions raising in poetess's mind, sweet and lovely poem !
Sat, January 12th, 2013 7:25pm
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thank you
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Princess21
Nice one. I like the the part "what if we are having just a nightmare".
Tue, March 20th, 2012 1:06pmAuthor
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thank you
Thu, March 22nd, 2012 3:07am