not a lot

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

realising what we have in life is enough.

the other day whilst walking down the lane,

i got in my side a terrible pain,

i stopped to sit upon a wall and rest,

when i noticed a very large nest.

 

i took a closer look at this,

and found myself looking into bliss,

for in the nest was no such animal,

just a glass sphere which floated like a ball.

 

as i did get closer to this sphere,

i heard a song singing with cheer,

i swore that i saw little people in there,

but thought no it's just in your head.

 

but then bright lights of colors i can not explain,

i could not get over that i was in that much pain,

the air around was warm and calm,

i kept feeling a fluttering about my arm.

 

they were like little people with wings,

dressed in colors that i have never seen,

a peaceful harmony was all around,

and found myself upon the ground.

 

the pain i had in my side had gone,

and i felt so nice so strong,

it was the music that kept me there,

it came all around me from everywhere.

 

it must have lasted for hours and hours,

as the next i knew was the rain fell in showers,

but i did not get wet by any of the rain,

infact it took away all my pain.

 

oh why in life can this be not true,

to take away pain from me and you,

still let us be thankful for what we got,

and what we got is not a lot.

 


Submitted: November 14, 2013

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elizabethrose

Interesting. For a moment there I thought the narrator was going to turn into a fairy. Nice meaning, good work :)

Thu, November 14th, 2013 7:21pm

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thank you elizabethrose for your comments just thought I would put something on paper to help my mind to work.

Thu, November 14th, 2013 11:26am

Henry Duthler

I enjoyed this... working in a nursing home, I've often imagined that this is what it must be like for my dementia patients when they see what the rest of us see... how the simplest of concepts make so much more sense than the harsh realities that burden the rest of us. I was worried as I read, that the pain would spread, that the tingling would continue and that a stroke were imminent. it's true, when it all ends... we have but not a lot.

Tue, November 19th, 2013 7:52am

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you come with nothing and you take nothing with you.

Wed, November 20th, 2013 5:01am

James William Cooper

Such a beautiful poem you've written there. A really emotive piece... I could actually imagine in my head as I read much of what was happening within. Really good work there, well done. :)

Mon, December 2nd, 2013 4:45pm

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thank you for reading my work and commenting, it do get the imagination going, yes.

Thu, December 5th, 2013 1:19am

Cesare777

Beautiful ??fantasy made poetry. Congratulations Artie

Fri, December 6th, 2013 2:35pm

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thank you cesare777, glad you liked it.

Sat, December 7th, 2013 1:33am

Desilu

A lovely story.
I enjoyed reading this poem,Artie,well done.
Dee.

Fri, December 13th, 2013 6:56pm

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thank you Dee haven't herd much from you lately have a lovely Christmas and a wonderful new year

Wed, December 18th, 2013 6:08am

Pyewacket Jones

I really like this poem. Good job :)

Mon, January 20th, 2014 9:29pm

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thank you I am glad to have you on board, I shall look at your work and give true comment.

Tue, January 21st, 2014 3:50am

MOmObeena

Artie you've done it again! So simply put and so deep as well. I love this.

Wed, February 12th, 2014 3:08pm

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thank you once again for your wonderful comment, I am pleased that you liked it.

Sun, February 16th, 2014 6:28am

Maggie Williams

This poem was amzing. I agree, simple. but deep. You need to write more poetry. Pleaese post another!!!:)

Sat, May 3rd, 2014 8:55pm

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thank you Maggie in my portfolio are over 100 poems to date.

Mon, May 5th, 2014 3:11am

Henry Duthler

This piece is beautiful, such a wonderfully vivid image of peace and healing.. well done!

Mon, May 5th, 2014 3:51pm

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thank you henry.

Wed, May 7th, 2014 11:25am

Vasanthi Papu

Wow! that was a wonderful way of expressing the pains in life and finally asking us to be contented with what we have. Of course we should thank God for giving us the strength to overcome the struggles in life.A great reality is portrayed well with apt words. good job!

Mon, May 19th, 2014 4:32pm

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thank you angelin for your comment and seeing it for what it is.

Tue, May 20th, 2014 5:35am

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