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i was sitting pondering the other day,

of if i met someone what would i say,

should i talk of the weather or of myself,

or should i ask my inner one for help.


i would tell this person of my life's ups and downs,

hoping i do not boar them,

or talk about the wedding gowns,

in the shop were i did saw them.


now thought i should i take some flowers,

this would keep them happy for hours,

oh what it would be like to meet someone new,

to give them my life making me happy too.


so until i do meet i will sit here think,

of the person to whom i would love to meet,

and on how i would spoil her with a coat of mink,

or how i would treat her better, cor that would be neat.


so watch it young lasses i out on the pull,

and if i see you i will give you a call,

i will take you out to a dinner that's grand,

and walk down the street with you hand in hand.



Submitted: October 11, 2013

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I like the rhyme scheme

Fri, October 18th, 2013 8:35pm


thank you glad you liked it.

Sat, October 19th, 2013 3:23am


Hi I like this story and also I'm the one that wrote the story "IT" the one about the pop can. If you liked that one then you should read my latest short story "At the Bottom of a River" instead of writing from the perspective of a pop can... this one is from the perspective of a cell phone. It is meant to be humorous and fun.

Sat, October 19th, 2013 5:05pm


thank you I will read your work and give you comment on your work.

Tue, October 22nd, 2013 7:04am


Good work, I liked the rhythm; it has a smooth flow. Thumbs up!

Sat, October 26th, 2013 3:52pm


thank you teach glad you approve.

Mon, October 28th, 2013 1:38am

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