To my Valentine...

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a few words to my Valentine.

 

To my Valentine…

By: Joe Attanasio

 

 

 

You hold my beating heart in your hand

I adore you! I’m yours to command

When you caress and kiss my heart

All my walls and barriers fall apart

 

My heart beats with yours as one

You complete me like no other, hun

When I am near you I feel so alive

My tired life force you revive

 

When we hug each other ever so tight

My contentment reaches a new height

My heart flutters when you’re in my arms

I get excited feeling all your charms

 

I love staring into you beautiful eyes

I always feel like I won a great prize

As you look so lovingly back at me

You make me feel a bit weak in the knee

 

You lips are always so moist and warm

Your kisses excite me like an electric storm

As we keep our lips pressed together

My heart feels as light as a feather

 

I can never tire of just watching you

My love for you just grew and grew

I want you near me for all time

You are truly my Valentine

 

 


Submitted: January 24, 2012

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Wilbur

What a love poem, what a lovely tribute. Lucky woman, attanasio, fortunate man.
My very best, Wilbur

Wed, January 25th, 2012 2:37am

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My romantic side I guess! Yes, it takes two to tango! I have a great partner.

Like Eeyore says from whinnie the poo "thanks for noticing me"


Always a joy hearing from you.

Tue, January 24th, 2012 8:18pm

dibbledabble

just AWWWWWWWW!!! you are such a fabulous guy, I am so happy for you and your valentine

Dibs

Wed, January 25th, 2012 10:19pm

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Thanks dibs! I do appreciate you so much.

Wed, January 25th, 2012 3:53pm

bobthebuilder

You really do have a bright romantic streak. Beautiful and inspiring.

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:57pm

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I still have not let my wife see this one. Not till Valentines day! Thanks for the comments as always I like to hear from you.

Sat, January 28th, 2012 8:54am

TwoStepz

Your wife is going to be a very smitten woman when she see's this! This was very sweet, a good rhyme!
Adorable that you made it for her, shows you have a lot of love in your heart!
Nothing more to say that it was superb!x
TwoStepz!x

Sat, February 4th, 2012 3:20pm

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Thanks very mcuh for the nice comment. I have her card and poem in two different places, I must remember to get them together for Valentines day. I wrote it so early I forget I have it.

Stop by anytime, always a pleasure hearing from you.

Sat, February 4th, 2012 8:09am

brucek

you are a sweet heart and she is one lucky girl.

Tue, February 7th, 2012 4:51pm

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Thanks for the nice comment Bruce and nice to see you again.

Tue, February 7th, 2012 12:40pm

Sparkles McGee

So unbelievably sweet.

Sat, February 11th, 2012 2:05am

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I just have to remember to give it to her in 4 more days! I wrote it so far ahead I might forget!

Fri, February 10th, 2012 6:40pm

divyansh

i didn't knew you were a romantic kind of guy
simply fabulous...
i enjoyed your poem....

Sat, February 11th, 2012 8:39am

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My wife says thats why she married me, because I was so romantic!

I am glad you liked it, thanks for stopping by for the read!

Sat, February 11th, 2012 4:17am

BITSxOFxKINKY

Awww Hun I want to be your valentine
??? Such A Sweet Romantic Valentines Poem ???

Sun, February 12th, 2012 9:21pm

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That ranks right up there as one of the best compliments in a comment!

Thanks!!

Sun, February 12th, 2012 1:57pm

SisiMaclachlan

I really loved this. i really felt like i related to exactly how you described these feelings! :)

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 2:46am

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Thank you very much for such a warm and kind comment!

Thu, March 1st, 2012 7:31pm

Shannan Browne

To have someone to inspire you like that - magic, pure blessed magic. I have no doubt that she loved the poem in her card :-) I reckon your words are flowing with the wonders many dream of - continue to nourish it.

Mon, June 11th, 2012 7:50am

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Such a warm and insightful comment. Thank you so much for the read and comment. I am very happy you enjoyed this.

Mon, June 11th, 2012 4:08am

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