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"They want to help. Your dad said you haven't eaten at all today. They're making food right now. You need to let them help you."

"I don't help. I'm used to losing everything I have.They don't need to worry."

"What have you lost? Talk, it might help."

"Fine. My brother was 10 years older than me. When I was six he died. He was in the car with my mom. It was raining and a drunk driver was speeding and hit head on into my moms car. They both died. My brother almost made it but it was too late."

"I'm sorry. I didn't know you lost your brother."

"Not many do."

He hugged me and I cried. His mom came out to get us and saw us. She didn't look happy but I kind of was. Derek cared about me. Not like a brother though. We went in and sat down to eat. We said grace and ate. I ate very little and heard everyone talk. Derek and his mom left later on. I went to my room and looked at a picture of me and Wildfire. Kesha called but I ignored her.

"Sasha. Time for bed." my dad came in and kissed me goodnight. I went to bed not long after. I dreamed of my mom, brother,and Wildfire that night.

Submitted: April 26, 2009

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Lady Elizabeth

I'd love to see these chapters fleshed out more! Right now they just seem like small snippets, and I'm not getting a huge sense of the characters.

Mon, April 27th, 2009 8:47pm


I only write a one page chapter and try to write small to get a lot in.

Mon, April 27th, 2009 3:21pm

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