"Take My Breath Away"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about a couple in a moment of passion.

A kiss for a kiss,
An embrace to feel her warmth,
Our hearts skip a beat,
Guess love beats its own rhythm,
Touch of your skin,
Feels soft to mine,
World around us mean nothing,
Its only you,
That means the world to me,
Our eyes wide shut,
Wishing this moment could last forever,
This feeling of this moment,
Only feels like heaven,
Or a beautiful dream,
Show me girl,
Dreaming I am not,
Take my breath away,
Drive me crazy,
Let my thoughts wonder,
As I run my fingers,
Through your soft hair,
Kissing your soft lips with care,
And making this moment last forever,
As we embrace.


Submitted: January 30, 2011

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FutureMarinesGirl

I like it...... well written. Can't wait to see what else you write.

Sun, January 30th, 2011 12:26pm

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Thank you for the compliment. I think you'll like my other work that I've got posted here. I'll be waiting to see what you think.

Sun, January 30th, 2011 5:44am

Yasir Bhojani

Awesomeness ! :)

Sun, January 30th, 2011 1:12pm

Author
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Thank you!

Sun, January 30th, 2011 5:43am

sunnyheeth

passionate. deep feelings. i like it

Mon, January 31st, 2011 6:54pm

Author
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Thank you! :) I'm glad you like it.

Mon, January 31st, 2011 10:56am

glitter snow426

oh so very warm and true heated moments of beautiful love!!! Wonderful work, great thoughts, great reaction too!!!

Tue, February 1st, 2011 7:23am

Author
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Thank you! :) Glad you like it.

Tue, February 1st, 2011 7:36am

chelseaaa

Cute poem!

Sat, February 5th, 2011 8:15pm

Author
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Thank you! :)

Sun, February 6th, 2011 12:44am

fresh spirits

Well that was over than what you want to express!passion between lines and feelings spread along

Wed, February 9th, 2011 8:08am

Author
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Thanks...I'm glad you like it.

Sat, February 12th, 2011 11:36am

Corr Zauber

Love the line 'guess love beats it's own rhythm' it's brill!! :)

Sat, February 12th, 2011 7:14pm

Author
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Thanks!

Sat, February 12th, 2011 11:32am

Inspiration

This is very good I see what you are saying about the format I will do my best.

Sun, February 13th, 2011 9:44am

Author
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Glad you like the poem...and remember I only gave a suggestion. Good luck and I look forward to seeing your new works. :)

Sun, February 13th, 2011 2:20am

poetshi

Great write, love the flow:)

Sun, February 13th, 2011 6:32pm

Author
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :)

Sun, February 13th, 2011 12:56pm

RickiandShay

This was amazing! Your writing takes my breathe away. Keep up the good work!
-Ricki

Sun, February 13th, 2011 7:16pm

Author
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Thank you! :) I'm glad you like it!

Sun, February 13th, 2011 12:55pm

Gadzookziie Spice 99

very passionate :]

Mon, February 14th, 2011 4:23am

Author
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Thank you! :)

Mon, February 14th, 2011 7:28am

Khano

This is absolutely thrilling. The words are somewhat addictive!

Fri, February 18th, 2011 6:48am

Author
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Thanks! I feel that this poem is my best written one by far. "Love Remains the Same" is still my all-time favorite poem I've written. Thanks again! :)

Sat, February 19th, 2011 2:04pm

Jo9927

That was rely passanate n i guess thts how it excatly feels..

Sat, February 19th, 2011 6:16am

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Thank you...I feel this is one of my best written poetry pieces. "Love Remains the Same" is by far still my favorite poem I've ever written. Thanks again! :)

Sat, February 19th, 2011 2:01pm

xXCapriSunXx

This was so so so so so so so adorable! :) I LOVED it. Very deep and meaningful, and it was well-worded to say the least. Just overall- beautiful. I'm impressed! :D Keep writing, you're good.

Much love,
xXCapriSunXx

Sat, February 19th, 2011 5:26pm

Author
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Awww...thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Sat, February 19th, 2011 1:50pm

Shweta

Love and more love flowed through this poem. Pleasurable experience...nicely expressed.:)

Tue, March 1st, 2011 8:50am

Author
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Thanks! I feel that this was one of my best written poetry pieces. :)

Fri, March 4th, 2011 8:30am

Melusine Crescent

I like the way you had the flow of it really match what a moment in heat would feel like. You're thoughts aren't meant to be long and descriptive, but very erratic and fleeting, yet still powerful enough to make you realize what's happening. Of course, I'm a sucker for poems like this. ;) Well done!

Thu, March 24th, 2011 11:55pm

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Thank you! :)

Thu, March 24th, 2011 7:54pm

Lucy Sahara xoxoxo

I love this work, full of emotion and love! Wonderful. lol! Anyway, great work, keep on writing and thanks for commenting on my work!

Wed, April 27th, 2011 1:49am

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Thank you! :) I'm glad you like it!

Wed, April 27th, 2011 4:29pm

DevilishRhea

Uhm, a line in between says, "Our eyes wide shut."
Is it a mistake or is it supposed to be that way?

Fri, June 3rd, 2011 8:00am

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Nope...that's how I wrote it.

Sun, June 5th, 2011 8:27am

Mary Jo

LOVED IT>>>>

Sun, September 11th, 2011 12:53am

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Thank you! :)

Sat, September 10th, 2011 7:03pm

erinnsiemaiy

If it touches your heart,
It cannot be taken back.

If it touches your soul ,
It cannot be forgotten.

If it touches your soul and heart,
Forever shall it be cherished.


I cherish your poems forever.

Sun, September 18th, 2011 9:21pm

Author
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Thank you! Your words bring peace to the soul! :)

Sun, September 18th, 2011 2:37pm

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