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You're an artist

A dreamer like me

Trapped in the boring

The monotony

It’s like an endless sea

Of uninspired hopes and dreams


Finally a breakthrough

A dose of inspiration

In a new location


In your dreams

That is where it lies

The creativity

All the surprise


Until you are broken and just dream of grey

Hoping you will find your way

Back on the path of color

Back on the path of light

Everything will be all right


I’ll be picking up the pieces of your broken dreams

Destroying the nightmares

Making sure to just leave the good


Maybe your dreams won’t come true

But at least they will be the best you’ve ever had

And you won’t be sad anymore

You can be happy


Submitted: May 15, 2014

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Hehe this poem really gets me :D I know exactly what you mean! Dreams are awesome, but they are just dreams. they wont be true, but they make us happy. bah if only they could actually come true. then, I would be bffs with harry styles and theo james and hom hiddleston. :c *sigh*

Sat, May 17th, 2014 10:42pm


I meant for it to be a poem, but if it is more of a poem whatever. I'm glad you like it.

Sat, May 17th, 2014 3:44pm


Typo fix. "I meant for it to be a song"

Wed, May 21st, 2014 3:22am


Another wonderful poem. I can see you pour your soul into every song..I love the fourth stanza. just SUPER AMAZING! I'm looking forward to the next. Another massive LIKE!

Wed, May 21st, 2014 5:29pm


Is this poem that turn into a song. Cool. You are vert artistic.

Fri, November 14th, 2014 2:43pm


Thank You.

Fri, November 14th, 2014 9:49am

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