Chapter 1: He didn't tell me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

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My name is Ruby and I live with my adopted parents because before I was born my parents died but the hospital was able to get me out in time to save me. I have an adopted sister called Jenna and she is much older than me, like 3 years older. It doesn’t seem much but to me it seems like she gets everything because she is older. If you do the math I am 14 and the youngest out of the whole family. My parents are very nice but the problem is they are busy so Jenna has to look after me unless I go out to party and get drunk. I know I’m too young but my parents won’t know because I sleep round my mates afterwards.
“Jenna, I’m going out to a party. Can you help me?” I called down the stairs to Jenna who was watching x-factor. “I’ll be right up ruby” she called up to me. I walked back into my room and went to have a quick shower. When I came out there was an outfit on the bed and Jenna had all her make-up and hair stuff spread across my dressing table. I quickly got myself dressed. Jenna then did my make-up and hair. I looked H-O-T, HOT. “Thanks JenJen” I hugged her. She just laughed and walked out my room. I grabbed a pair of shoes, my purse, money and a cardigan. I headed out the door and started walking towards the party.
30 minutes later
“Ruby, oh my god you looked gorgeous ” my bffl, Pearl said. I just shrugged and walked into the party it seemed quite dead but when I walked in music played and everyone started dancing. A boy who had sexy black hair asked me to dance. I walked to the centre of the dance floor and then a slow song just came on. We started to dance and before I knew it police sirens were coming up the street. Everyone was running out of the house. I ran down the street and started walking casually to my house because I wasn’t drunk so it didn’t matter. I walked past a strippers club and I walked inside to see if I could just grab a drink and sit down. Before I could order I felt myself being lifted up onto the stage. I saw all the men cheering at me to dance but I jumped off the stage. 3 men came up to me and asked me “Would you like a drink?” I nodded my head, 2 of them led me over to a seat at the back while the other went to get the drinks. He gave me the drink and I drunk it. I looked at my watch and it was past midnight. I dropped the glass on the floor and ran out the club and headed home. I heard footsteps behind me but I didn’t think anything of it and kept walking. I turned around when I heard the footsteps again. I saw nothing and turned around to walk again to the 3 men at the club right in front of me. Before I could scream a cloth over my mouth and nose. I was plunged into complete darkness.


Submitted: August 28, 2009

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Alex3315

ooo i like it so can't wait for chapter 2:)

Fri, August 28th, 2009 10:25pm

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thanks chapter 2 will be up soon

Sat, August 29th, 2009 2:00pm

WolfyBabez

great story rachael its brill so far

Fri, November 27th, 2009 11:13pm

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thnx

Fri, November 27th, 2009 3:41pm

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