Chapter 1: Ben - She's The One

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 2

Bored, I sat on the wooden fence that surrounded the park, carefully, I leaned back, trying not to fall backwards onto the grass. I looked around desperately, searching pointlessly for something to do and failing miserably. The sky was grey and cloudy. Rain pattered down from the clouds, slicing through the air like tiny daggers before falling softly onto the ground. The swings swung ghostly as if someone was on them. The roundabout spun like someone was spinning it slowly. The trees rustled in the darkness. The wind blew loudly through the air, whistling in the eeriness of the air, brushing against the leaves of each tree. The cold air caressed my skin softly, making me shiver. I looked around me in search of humanity, and that’s when I first saw her. And in that single second, i knew, deep down, that she was the one for me. Her brown hair cascaded from a hair clip in a fountain at the back of her head. Her side fringe puffed out slightly. She was average height and she was wearing a neon pink and checkered shirt with black skinny jeans and black, long, sexy boots. I felt myself freeze. I stared at her longingly. As if feeling my gaze on her, she turned around to face me, her chocolate brown eyes gazing in my direction. A pink and black bow held her fringe away from eyes. Her big brown eyes looked so innocent and were easy to get lost in. Her moist lips were mesmerising. Her smile was beautiful and flawless; her body gave away small parts of her personality. For example by looking at her i could tell she was the fun, flirty, happy type of girl. After a while of staring at each other, I saw her say something to someone out of my sight before she walked across the empty, abandoned road and towards the fence I was sitting on.

"Hey?" She said confused as she looked me up and down, her chocolate orbs giving away the fact that she was confused as to why I was staring at her.
"Oh, um, Hi!" I replied nervously. "So I see you just moved in?" I said slowly, searching for something to talk about.
"Urm yeah," She answered and smiled dazzlingly at me
"So where did you move from?" I asked returning the smile.
"London," She replied
"You don't seem like a posh little Londoner?" I joked.
"Oh no, I’m not from the posh part of London, as you can tell, I’m from the druggy, alcoholic, stripping, clubbing
London," She said.  She slapped her head softly, "Please say that didn't just totally putting you off talking to me ever again?" She sighed. I Chuckled.
"So you’re telling me that you do drugs, drink, go clubbing and have sex with anything that has a pulse?" I asked, clearly messing around.
"I don't do any of that," She giggled innocently and bit her lip while looking down, causing her bow to slide out of place a bit which let her fringe slightly fall in front of her eyes. I smiled at her silently.
"I'm Ben, by the way," I grinned.
"I'm Lucy," She said. Unfortunately, a large, muscular man called her over to the house, clearly showing that the moving van was gone so she should go.
"I gotta go; do you go to the public school?" She asked me.
"Yeah, will I see you there?" I uttered through numb lips.
She smiled while nodding her head.
"Will I see you out here tomorrow?" I questioned hopefully.
"Definitely," She grinned.
“I’ll knock for you at 12!” I said and Lucy nodded before turning around and running over to her house, her hair flowing out behind her.

Submitted: December 19, 2010

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good Story :D update me?

Sun, December 19th, 2010 2:17pm


Thanks and will go :)

Sun, December 19th, 2010 9:21pm


This is good. Wondering what will happen next. If you want, you could seperate your words into paragraphs and not in one long paragraph. But it's just a thought. Thanks for telling me about this. I'm gonna go to the next chapter!

Mon, February 13th, 2012 3:43pm


okay thankyou, i will put it in paragraphs from now on then to make it clearer and thanks so much :D

Mon, February 13th, 2012 10:40am

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