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A/N: Soo do you think i should keep the layout like this? Like, with paragraphs or without paragraphs? Sorry i took so long to upload, my computer broke and i only have the story saved as a file on there. But its fixed now, obviously, YAAAY!!! :D Also, did i like, over describe? or not? because to be honest, i read it over and thought, "Wow! Talk about descriptive!" :O cos like i explained like every second. Is that alright or should i try to describe less? so yeah, seriously though, pretty please with a cherry and whipped cream on top, comment? i'll love you forevers ;D x
Submitted: January 03, 2011
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Paragraphs are good you can never have too many paragraphs! I think you didn't over descibe because of the nature of this particular chapter, it was describing quite a short space of time so it's fine. Great chapter! kmu!
Tue, January 4th, 2011 10:13amAuthor
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thankyou :) i was really worried that i'd describe so much that it just made it boring. Will do :)
Tue, January 4th, 2011 5:01am