Roses of Black

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

ya know, i think dark poems are quite fun to write. however, i will write happier ones later on. ;D

Darkness that beckons me
Tempting me with promises
Mere illusions

Stars that bring me light
Only to falter and wither in the pale ebony

A dark melody whispers into my deaf ears
Silently awakening old feelings concealed in my heart

She beckons to me
Mesmerizing me with a dark, yet sweet song
Decorating me with the sweet scent of black roses

She has taken everything from me
All that I’ve cared for
All that I’ve loved.

Once more she sings
The song that lurks in each person’s soul
Ensnaring those who fall prey to her
Taking them captive, to submit to her will

Leaving them lifeless
No spark of life in them
And always with a heart decorated with black roses

Red roses that were once pure
Red roses that she tainted black
Decorating those once pure souls
With the black roses that were once pure

With her Roses of Black.


Submitted: March 24, 2009

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FancyJumper

I LOVE THIS!!! Really creative, this is an incredible poem, I really like it. Love the words you use, how you put the together, the whole thing. Good job!!

Anelise

Tue, March 24th, 2009 2:36am

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thanks!! i wasn't too sure how this poem would go since i don't write this style a lot. i'm really happy you liked it! XD

Mon, March 23rd, 2009 7:39pm

Brian W

Bugger I was hoping to be first. But WOW this is amazing I really like it I see this poem as beautiful not dark. Well written I am impressed

Tue, March 24th, 2009 2:42am

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LOL, you still got here 2nd! ^_^ really? i thought it might be too dark, but seeing that some think of it as beautiful makes me ecstatic! thank you!!

Mon, March 23rd, 2009 7:44pm

ShadowsandMisery

Evil as a she Fitting in a way, great poem, I like dark too, very nicely done.

Wed, March 25th, 2009 3:55am

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thanks!! whoohoo! another person who likes it! ;D

Tue, March 24th, 2009 8:57pm

yuu shindemura

cool! very depicting scene of a poem, and by the pronoun "she" and the black roses, makes me think of the character i have: the black bride, Yume. she's in the novel black roses and a red rose that i have. ;)

anywayz, yeah, the surreal depiction of evil and frailty is seen here! nice!XD

Wed, March 25th, 2009 8:43am

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thanks!! oooo sounds kool. ;D

Wed, March 25th, 2009 6:43am

Thewriter960508

Awsum! It is very dark and subtle; love it!!!
It would do great as a play monologue, i think u shud write a aplay around this it was just BRILL! XD
:)

Sun, March 29th, 2009 11:14am

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lol, thanks!! aww.... thanks! XD

Sun, March 29th, 2009 8:39am

angellynn

very good! I have just recently started doing dark writes.. Lol! I did'nt know I had it in me...

Wonderful Job!

Angellynn :)

Mon, March 30th, 2009 2:25am

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lol, thanks! XD good luck with your dark writing!

Sun, March 29th, 2009 8:04pm

Amy2609

its pretty ^_^

Tue, March 31st, 2009 6:23am

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thanks!

Tue, March 31st, 2009 6:51am

Dead nothingness

This is really a great poem.I like it a lot! Its really great. :)

Wed, April 1st, 2009 1:41pm

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sank you~

Wed, April 1st, 2009 6:44am

xxemowritingxx

wow, this is so dark and morbid/ obviously i like it/ lol

Thu, April 2nd, 2009 9:43pm

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lol, thanks!

Thu, April 2nd, 2009 3:05pm

VampireGirl

This is really good!!! I love it!
*~*Vampire*~*

Mon, April 6th, 2009 2:55am

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^^ thanks!

Mon, April 6th, 2009 3:09pm

Sweet Angel Eyes

your verry creative i realy enjoyed this you are a grate righter keep up the good jobb :D cant wait to read more

Tue, October 20th, 2009 6:42am

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-blushes- thanks~ ////

Tue, October 20th, 2009 5:32pm

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