Revenge Is Sweet (only for now!)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Chapter 1 (v.1) - Revenge Is Sweet (only for now!)

Submitted: December 17, 2011

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Submitted: December 17, 2011






Thank you for taking the time to read this. This is just my prolouge. I hope this story intrests loads of people. 


=Daniela xx








A girl sat by the old cathedral, in her loose black funeral clothes. Her usually thin, wavy, brown hair had disappeared. Black, thick, straight hair was taking it’s place.


This should’ve never happened, she thought. 


She normally had red cheeks and tanned skin but a shade so pale that it looked like white covered her arms and face. The emotion on her face was un-guessable. Her black eyes stared into the darkness and her lips didn’t smile or frown.


Her eyes were normally changing between blue and green, but never they had been dark misty black before. 


You would’ve thought she was dead, not the girl buried nearby, in the nightmare of the graveyard. 


The time was reaching midnight.


“Dia! Dia!” The deep voice rang out, bouncing off every wall and tree in the whole area, outside the dark, old cathedral.


The girl got up, slowly and lifelessly.




“I’m coming, Daniel,” she said, her words showing pain, anger and tiredness. 


I’m going to get whoever did this, she thought to herself. I’m going to get whoever ruined my and her life.


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