Chapter 1: Introducing Elliot

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 322
Comments: 3

\"Elliot!\" Elliot's dad shouted.

\"What!\". Elliot walked from across the street to the alleyway where there Chevrolet 1996 car they now lived in. They have been living in this piece of junk car since her mom died last year. When she got to the car her dad said,

\"You have to babysit your brother tonight, I have some work to take car of.\" Elliot hated her dad.

He was the reason her mom was dead in the first place but that's later in the story. \"I don't have to listen to you!\"Elliot exclaimed. She was tired of this. They were supposed to keep this a secret. You know living in a car, driving around the city every night to a new alleyway. Elliott dad didn't like Elliot's attitude. He was always drinking and leaving her and her brother Maxy behind toward do crazy things. He was always saying things that he didn't really mean. And that's why he said this,

\"Your just like your mother, selfish and stubborn, and she died that night the same way.\" He sneered.

Elliot couldn't believe what he just said. How could he say that about her own mother?

\"Ya right! She was never like that she was great but you had to ruin it.! You killed her.and everyone knows it!\" Elliot screeched.

Her dad just looked at her with his face as red as a beet and smoke about to come out of his ears. When he finally snapped back into reality, Maxy, Elliot's little baby brother, was crying.

\"Oh great,\"Elliot's dad exclaimed. \"Now look what all your yelling did! Elliot, since you want to act like an adult, take your brother to the diner so he can get some food...\"

But her dad was talking to no one. Elliot was already speed walking to the diner down the road. The tears starting to come as rain started to pour...


Submitted: July 05, 2011

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Khano

keep it up! :)... just make sure you space the paragraphs out. It's not your fault, booksie does this all the time. Take care!

Wed, July 6th, 2011 9:12am

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Ya I know but thanks for reading well add more soon add will fix it also.! Smiley.faces and rainbows.! Hehe.! :-)

Wed, July 6th, 2011 10:39am

sergofhope

Great so far. Quite interesting, I'm really wondering what's happening and the conflict, and all that STUFF. KMU hon.

Thu, July 7th, 2011 11:31am

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I know I said this before and I know I might sound old but thanks! Everuthing will back sense as the story progresses! I won't be writing until I find a way to write more efficently (meaning getting a laptop again). I will sure will KUU when I do start writing again! Look at my mustache man! c}; Hehe. Bye!

Sun, April 1st, 2012 9:09pm

sergofhope

Great so far. Quite interesting, I'm really wondering what's happening and the conflict, and all that STUFF. KMU hon.

Thu, July 7th, 2011 11:31am

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I certainly well. And thanks you.! Smiley faces & Rainbows. Hehe. ;-)

Thu, July 7th, 2011 8:37am

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