Chapter 1: Hidden Answers

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 461
Comments: 12

 

 

Prologue

 

She died. I should have listened to the voices inside my head and the dreams I dreamt. Nevertheless, how should I know that I have the power of seeing the future? I blame her death on me and I am sure she does too. Why else would she come back to earth to haunt me?

 

There is something odd about her spirit.. She is not the same she seems like a different person. It seems like there is someone else in her dead body.

 

What is wrong with my dead best friend? Why does she hate me so much? 

 

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Character Pictures!

(Main Character)

Rachel Locks 

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Anna Smiths 

 

 

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Trevin Woods

 

 

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Kevin Nolan

 

 

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Serena Williams 

 

 

Authors Note: Okay this is my new novel I am starting!!:) BEFORE I put up the first chapter I am going 

to need at least 20 comments. I am not going to start a story with no one reading it I need the inspiration. 

Please let me know what you think of the Prologue and the Character Pictures!! (:

Xoxo

~T

 

 


Submitted: July 10, 2012

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b l i s s

Pretty interesting! :D update me if you must

Thu, July 12th, 2012 12:16am

Author
Reply

Haha okay hun!(:

Wed, July 11th, 2012 5:19pm

JEMSx2

Whoa...sounds interesting. Love the picture of Trevin!! ? KMU when you write more, ok?

Thu, July 12th, 2012 12:20am

Author
Reply

Definitely!!(: And much thanks love!!!(:

Wed, July 11th, 2012 5:25pm

Keekee1996

Lols I love it where do you get your character pictures from?

Thu, July 12th, 2012 2:01am

Author
Reply

Google Images (: and thank you!:)

Wed, July 11th, 2012 10:11pm

GracefulDreams

Nice pictures and the story sounds interesting and mysterious. I'm looking forward to reading the story, KMU? :)

Thu, July 12th, 2012 7:26am

Author
Reply

Thanks hun!!(: Definitely!!

Thu, July 12th, 2012 2:19am

lilthflames

Intresting begin

Thu, July 12th, 2012 7:54am

Author
Reply

Thanks!(:

Thu, July 12th, 2012 2:19am

lilthflames

*sighs* sorry about the first comment. I can spell by the way but apparently can't refrain myself from hitting the post button :) what I was going to say was- It's a interesting begining and It seems like a good topic. Please update me when you have the first chapter :)

Thu, July 12th, 2012 7:59am

Author
Reply

Of course!!(: Thank you so much!!

Thu, July 12th, 2012 2:20am

alexalex21

Kmu

Thu, July 12th, 2012 8:25am

Author
Reply

Of course!!(:

Thu, July 12th, 2012 2:20am

GuiltyPleasure

This is beauty beauty beauty... the plot, the characters, the pictures, the wholeness..

Thu, July 12th, 2012 7:14pm

Author
Reply

Awwwwwwww thank you so much hun!!!!(: bless your heart!!!

Thu, July 12th, 2012 3:43pm

GuiltyPleasure

Well done...xoxo

Thu, July 12th, 2012 7:14pm

Author
Reply

Thank you!!(:
Xox
~T

Thu, July 12th, 2012 3:44pm

fallenangel1997

I like your stuff fo far:)

Sat, July 14th, 2012 12:56am

Author
Reply

Thank You!(:

Sat, July 14th, 2012 1:52am

aellaie

This seems interesting :)

One thing; between 'she is not the same' and 'she is a different person' you need a comma/other punctuation mark to split up the two parts of the sentence.

Also, don't worry about how many people are reading, just go for it! I sometimes feel disheartened too, but just keep writing anyways, it doesn't matter how many people are reading, it matters how good your story is! :)

Other than that, keep me updated when you post the first chapter! ~

Sat, July 14th, 2012 5:17pm

Author
Reply

Of course hun!!(: Thank you for the advice!!

Mon, July 16th, 2012 5:56pm

danielle12

Wow. Just that tiny paragraph has me wanting more. I like the character pictures so far and the beginning was well started. I think this pricked everyone's curiosity. Hurry up people and comment! KMU please?!

Tue, July 17th, 2012 2:09am

Author
Reply

Oh hun I so will!!!(:

Wed, July 18th, 2012 4:17pm

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