Her Lips (My soulmate)

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For Angelynns lip challenge

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Dangerously close to losing control
Suppressed intuitions are taking their toll
Passion and lust for the girl of my dreams
Wondering what this feeling means
Longing for love, only she could give
What I wouldn't do for just one kiss
As though this girl can read my mind
She leans in closer and closes her eyes
Sparks fly as her lips touch mine
Colors explode from somewhere inside
Beautiful rainbows fill my head
As our lips part and I'm sane again
Taking her hand, Never more sure
Ive finally found my soulmate in her


Submitted: July 31, 2009

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angellynn

Beautiful! I'll let you know how it goes. Good Luck!

Angellynn:D

Fri, July 31st, 2009 4:51pm

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thanks so much!!!!!!

Sat, August 22nd, 2009 3:27pm

Night Write

WOW!!! This is VERY colorful! Loved the vision that it produced. I must give this a solid 10! It is a perfect write!!! NICE JOB DARLING.

Fri, August 7th, 2009 3:48pm

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Thank you love, as always you are entirely too sweet to me! xoxo.

Fri, August 7th, 2009 10:26am

SierraWriteNow

I think that you have completely captured it. This poem came alive to me when I read it. Thank you for writing such great poetry!
:)

Thu, September 3rd, 2009 8:08am

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Thank you! thats really sweet hun! Xo.

Thu, September 3rd, 2009 8:21am

Violet Moon

This was really good! I'm glad that I read it! I hope you do well in your contest! Gave this an "I Like It" vote. :D

Fri, September 11th, 2009 2:14am

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Thank you!!! Youre so sweet !!!

Thu, September 10th, 2009 7:22pm

Ezekial Danger

Very very good my friend. I'm a sap for romantic poetry, as i am a fellow writer of it. all the feelings this conveyed kind of fit with how i'm feeling right now, it was almost therapeutic

Fri, September 11th, 2009 3:15am

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Aww thank you.. Im glad you like this piece. I love romance :)

Thu, September 10th, 2009 8:56pm

Graeme Montrose

Fri, September 11th, 2009 9:25am

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Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:27am

Red Melody

The lips are a great decoy, the poem killed me. Wonderful!

Fri, September 11th, 2009 10:36am

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haha thank you darlin!

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:27am

Nicola

Lovely done if i do say so myself. Absolutely loved reading this, well written, imagery and atmosphere was protrayed amazingly. Awesome =D Well done!

Fri, September 11th, 2009 2:35pm

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Thanks so much! Thats really nice of you to say!

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:28am

yuu shindemura

great rhythms and rhymes, ms. sam!;) very well taken!^^ yup i also like it.^^

and congratz very much on this work of yours, 'her lips (my soulmate)' being featured today as of sept.11, 09.;)

Fri, September 11th, 2009 2:50pm

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thank you! I never had anything featured before lol. But Im glad so many people like it =)

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:29am

Alex Keemon

Heartfelt and rippling with passion. Amazing, and thanks for the glimspe into your soul...it's bright with rainbows... :)

Fri, September 11th, 2009 11:43pm

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thanks so much! and yess... somedays it most certainly is ;)

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:02pm

blackwriter13

Aww..I Lubb It, It Makes Me Think Bout my Lips..=( My Lips AreNt ThaT Juicy..LolX Lubb It Dough..5 stars!!

Sat, September 12th, 2009 12:04am

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I bet your lips are perfect! Thank you darlin! Thats so sweet

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:04pm

the musically challenged cricket

awwww this was fantastic! I loved this poem and it was just beautiful! I totally understand the feeling in this poem too :D

Sat, September 12th, 2009 12:51am

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thank you! Thats very kind of you!

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:05pm

lulusweet0717

This is great! Nice poem :)

Sat, September 12th, 2009 1:19am

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thanks!

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:07pm

surfergal17

Beautiful :) and romantic :)

Sat, September 12th, 2009 5:49am

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thanks! I felt very romantic writing it :)

Fri, September 11th, 2009 10:51pm

rowling stones230

I loved it!!!!! It was amazing

Sat, September 12th, 2009 12:19pm

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thank you!!!

Sat, September 12th, 2009 10:49am

malpallovestowrite

very nice. i really liked it. i wish my talent was that good. i can noy ryime though :( but u are very good

Sat, September 12th, 2009 8:31pm

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AWW thanks :D Im sure youre great!!!

Sat, September 12th, 2009 9:38pm

soul

that was amazing! it had my heart racing and btterflies swirling. Well done. :)

Sun, September 13th, 2009 5:08am

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ty much! Its nice to know so many people like my poem

Sat, September 12th, 2009 10:19pm

Guy McEvoy

Wow I really enjoyed this poem. Very meaningful. Please read my story called LuNcH WiTh My GoOd FrIeNd TrUmAn! I'll read/comment on some of your other stories.

Mon, September 14th, 2009 12:25am

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Ill be sure to do that. thanks :)

Sun, September 13th, 2009 5:39pm

confusedcutie09

that's was great i love it :)!!!!!

Mon, September 14th, 2009 5:17pm

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thanks hun :)

Mon, September 14th, 2009 10:54am

illalwayslovehim

Absolutely amazing!

Tue, September 15th, 2009 1:39am

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:) ty much

Fri, September 18th, 2009 11:54pm

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