. Die! .

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

Like in your dreams.

Die!

And let them crawl.

Beneth your eyes.

Full of tears.

Of tears!

Die!

And let them know.

Who is really a misery and pain.

Rot inside the ground,

untill the sorrow is gone.

Die!

Like in your dreams.

Like in your dreams.


Submitted: October 26, 2008

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Dark Skylight

This is really one dark poem.You can feel the anger,and sadness inside.I like your poem.
:)

Sun, October 26th, 2008 8:38pm

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thanks

Sun, October 26th, 2008 1:53pm

Me Against The World

GAH, I love it. that is seriously amazing. I've never read a poem on this topic that is as unique as this. GREAT, fantastic, wonderful, lovely job!

Sun, October 26th, 2008 9:24pm

Author
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lol.Thanks a looot!A lot a lot a lot!Im glad you liked it. :)

Sun, October 26th, 2008 2:37pm

S.C. Kross

die.... LOL. I luv how dark this is... :)

Sun, October 26th, 2008 9:51pm

Author
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!thanks a lot.Im glad you liked it !
:)

Tue, October 28th, 2008 6:52am

Eresed

Very awesome. I'm going to have the last three lines rolling around in my head for the rest of the day. :D Keep up the good work!

Tue, October 28th, 2008 2:35pm

Author
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Awww,thanks a loooot!Im really happy you liked it.
:)

Tue, October 28th, 2008 7:37am

BeautyInNegative

Great job! Another for the books!

~:~Misery

Tue, October 28th, 2008 6:17pm

Author
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Thank you!
:)

Fri, October 31st, 2008 9:27am

Jesyka

Wow, that was great. I loved it.

"Rot inside the ground,

until the sorrow is gone."

I love those lines.

Brilliant!!!

Mon, February 16th, 2009 1:15pm

Author
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Thank you a lot,lol. :)

Wed, February 18th, 2009 8:42am

Night Write

God, I know I shouldn't admit this but "I loved this dark poem!" Go figure! Thoughts I've had myself I'm sure! And though it was dark it was pretty!!! How odd was that coment! But it truly was! Good job!

Sun, February 22nd, 2009 3:32pm

Author
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Lol,thank you very much!Im glad and happy you liked it,and thank you for reading too and commenting,hh. :)

Sun, February 22nd, 2009 7:39am

MoNicA sToDaRd LoVes VAMpires

ooohhhhhhhh, dark. i likey :P

amazing ur great, too!!

FINALLY, the new chapter of My SInful Lullaby!!!!!!!!! read and comment!! sorry for the wait!! XxMonicaXx

Mon, July 13th, 2009 12:17am

Author
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hh,thanks a lot! Oki,npp :)

Sat, August 1st, 2009 10:42am

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