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Cold skin, even colder persona. My very existence strike fear into the hearts of many. I lust for the nectar of life. Preferably a young, gorgeous teenage girl. not JUST because the flesh so tender and the blood so much sweeter, no. But rather because this curse was forced upon me following my eighteenth birthday. I live a lonely existence. Living only to satisfy my unquenchable thirst. But, alas, even I was awestruck in her presence. Her beauty was ravishing. Her blood needed to be spilled. She stares me down, seeing for what I was, an abomination abondoned my god. Still she waltez towards me. I take her to my home, we fuck, her warmth flesh drowning me i n pools of ectasy and desire. I finished and as she layed on my bed. I saw the sacrs on her wrist and knew why she came to me. I sink my fangs deep, deep into her neck, draining her of life. Not once did she flinch or scream, she simply dug her nails into my back and moaned  in pleasure. I took her life. Now she remains inside me. Forever, and always.


Submitted: March 01, 2011

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Hyde

Wow, amazing. Short, but I really loved it. Keep writing , I'd love to see more like this.

Wed, March 2nd, 2011 6:24pm

Micka Holloway

wow, just wow!! omg do that again!! your voice is really nice!!! Im not gonna lie, i almost fainted!
I was eating when you said I take her to my home, we fuck. It caught me so off guard that i almost choked, cuz i wasn't reading along.

All in all. that was an emotional ride for a girl.
Please do that again!!!

-Micka

Wed, March 2nd, 2011 7:34pm

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I take it you enjoyed it ?! xDDD

Wed, March 2nd, 2011 11:48am

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