Go Ahead

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: War and Military  |  House: Booksie Classic

We're all the same person, really.

Go ahead and throw at me all you've got

I can catch it

I'll hold it for you

Until you're ready

To have it have back

Throw at me

All your symbols

They go right through

Like a freight train

Haven't you ventured a guess

At who we really are

Aren't we all our own gods and goddesses

Waiting to be told

By our personal authorities

When to jump

Aren't we all

Simulating each other's plan

Stimulating each other's ego

Throw me a another line

It will be fine

Imagine if you will

 


Submitted: April 02, 2007

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doc byron

Yeah, man. I've been there. But everytime some asshole threw something my way, I just ducked. Loved it.

Mon, April 2nd, 2007 4:07pm

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Appreciate all of your feedback.

Mon, April 2nd, 2007 1:42pm

leesah

You got me thinking, so smooth...love it:)

Wed, April 4th, 2007 4:53am

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Thanks lees!

Tue, April 3rd, 2007 10:01pm

air

Here catch this :) :) :) ***
This is a very good poem. I like going through reads now and then, makes me feel good

Sat, November 3rd, 2007 12:48am

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Thank you.. :}{:

Mon, November 5th, 2007 10:17am

findingmyway

This got me thinking..a little too much for me late at night haha. :) It flows so smoothly..wow..awesome job.

Mon, July 14th, 2008 3:44am

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The time is right then. I really appreciate the reads and sweet comments.

Sun, July 13th, 2008 9:20pm

Ethyn

This was a well written poem. What I got out of it was a sense of endurence. If something is thrown at you, take it and go for another. If you ever have the time, read War in the United States, 2047. Critisim is accepted. I also have other things you could read just by simply going to my booksie page.

Mon, November 10th, 2008 11:49pm

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Thanks for checking me out. I'll be sure to read you. peace

Mon, November 10th, 2008 3:57pm

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