Short Version
WorK!
By
Edward J. Bradley
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"WorK!"
Just One More
4-Letter Word
Ending With The
Letter "K"!
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Copyright Edward J. Bradley 2009
Long Version
WorK!
By
Edward J. Bradley
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"WorK!"
Just One More
4-Letter Word
Ending With The
Letter "K"!
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"WorK!"
Just One More
Abysmal Day
In Exchange For
Dismal Pay!
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"WorK!"
Just One More
Abysmal Day
Spent At WorK For
Little Pay!
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Copyright Edward J. Bradley 2009
Submitted: February 28, 2009
© Copyright 2023 EdwardJBradleySr. All rights reserved.
Comments
SHORT, SLEEK, SHARP AND FUNNY!
Sat, February 28th, 2009 10:37amgreat poem to the point.
Sat, February 28th, 2009 11:17amAwesome! Greetings Chiqui
Sat, February 28th, 2009 12:40pmHello Ed, great to see you posting once again.
I can't say that I remember 'Turkel'
but I just may look him up under the link you left up there...
~katie
yeah and i just got used to that word everytime! hehe ends with a big letter K, i salute that! oh, and you just posted this yesterday, taht's cool! ^.^ and thanks for such an infomative summary about Mr. Terkel. i'm sure he would approve this work of yours just as fine! greetings there by the way Mr. Ed!
Sun, March 1st, 2009 10:30amStuds Terkel was an amazing character for sure.
I love reading some of the comments he made.
As you may know he was black listed by McCarthy,
and of course J.E. Hoover kept a file on him;
Studs said he was rather upset to find that his
wife's FBI file was larger than his, and that
Hoover, had a lifelong suspicion of those who
thought the Constitution actually meant something.
Great post Ed. Kind regards M
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Manyfacets:
Thank you for reading, commenting, the compliment and "I Like It" vote. Most appreciated.
Didn't know Studs Terkel was an (un)official target of "J. Edgar". This places him in the category as 1 of my favorite comic strip cartoonists and writers, Walt Kelly of "Pogo" fame.
When an undergraduate college student (1967-71), many in the Peace Movement were concerned about "phone taps" & being placed "under surveillance" by the F.B.I. as it was being run by "J. Edgar". To dispel these concerns, some of us may have had, we would end every telephone conversation with "F-U J. Edgar!".
It was a matter that never bothered me, personally. For 3 reasons.
1. I was a U.S. Navy veteran of the Vietnam War and my younger brother, William Martin Bradley, in 1967 (as I was starting college) and at the age of 18, lost his life in a land mine explosion, near Da Nang, while serving with the U.S. Army.
2. Considered myself to be at least as patriotic an American as "J. Edgar" ever considered himself. Don't recall if "J. Edgar" ever served with the U.S. Military. During wartime. Or if he even wanted to enlist. At any time.
3. I was not employed by the F.B.I. and did not have to submit or answer to the authority of "J. Edgar".
Again! Thank you!
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Haha I liked it short and funny
Mon, March 2nd, 2009 6:28amI loved the short version of it, very witty. It is beautiful when so much can be said with so few words! I will read more of your writing.
I hope you'll come by and read the two posts I have (I'm new), your honest feedback will be appreciated.
Regards,
Zin
Thank you for the little piece of history. Ironically I live in Chicago.
Wed, March 4th, 2009 1:21pmshort and sweet. very creative work. take care, Tiger.
Fri, March 6th, 2009 3:12pmshort straight to the point,i often observe people heading to work and have put us as a larger breed of ants i have never understood the purpose i understand that food and accommodation don't come cheap'thats y i question the purpose in life in general we spend our entire lifes(most of us) working for what cars that devalue as soon as we leave the car yard?fuel to run those cars to get us to wrk,i thought we are ment to be the cleaver ones on this plannet?i watch birds and other animals going by there daily routines,life may be short but at least there's seem to have substance,in saying that i enjoyed reading your poem.
Fri, March 6th, 2009 8:22pmVery funny! :)
Thu, March 12th, 2009 10:47pmhaha ya i liked the letter k one...ha very nice...although i do find work pays little except i finally landed a good job so i cant complain..thanks for dropping by
Fri, March 13th, 2009 2:55amWell done Mr Bradley.
Little pay. Little poem.. Lol! I guess you get your moneys worth...
Great Job!
Angellynn :)
ha
i like this one
it does seem that we all work and work and work until we die and we still seem to get nowhere.
good job
please feel free to check out my works as well.
I like it. :) But how do you know he/she makes little pay :P goojob
Wed, March 18th, 2009 1:57amHave you read Alin de Botton's latest essay on WORK?
You say it much more concisely.
If they're watching me, they're leaving somebody else alone.
ATB
Work is a fascinating subject. Some thoughts on reading your poem. Aristotle believed that we cannot be creative if employed (note the subtle difference)
Marx argued that work only becomes work when we do not particularly wish to do the task, and that we differ almost from day to day in what we wish to do - and so society should therefore be constructed in such a way as to allow us to be whatever we want to be that particualr day. Mmmm.
Presbyterians, at least Scottish ones, believe that not to work is to be sinful. As for getting pleasure from work - well, what is pleasure? Remember the Scots minister who thundered from the pulpit: Ye can hiv yir sex, but ye better no enjoy it. And what is their influence upon America, even today?
Ford said people work for money
Noted British Sociologists argue manual workers only work to get money to fulfill themselves in other arenas
To be called 'redundant' is to feel a most personal slight
We are 'stakeholders', 'associates' - until someone disassociates us from them
If machines take over, will what is left be termed 'work'?
Employed work is the rope bridge over the burning pit in the Indiana Jones movies?
There is plenty of work - we just need organising.
Workers climb the famed Hierarchy of Needs only to find someone has removed the lower rungs.
Me? I'm retired.
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cartera:
Again! Thank you for reading and your most thoughtful comments. Most appreciated.
In the U.S., there is quote, attributed to the "Pennsylvania Dutch"/Amish/Mennonite/Anabaptist religion, culture or tradition. It goes like this: "Heads and hearts to God! Hands to work!". The "way to salvation". For them. Most probably, for the rest of us as well. An interesting group, from among whom, I may claim some of my own ancestry.
In the 1970's, a group of Amish, from Lancaster County, Pennsylvania settled in upstate New York, just north of Utica, N.Y.. Until then, the area had become economically depressed. The new arrivals purchased farms, worked them and revived the entire local economy. One reason is that they deposited large sums in the local banks, which had been starved for capital.
It seems, the Amish are extremely thrifty. Self-reliant by: providing for all of their own needs, saving & investing what money they may receive from goods sold to those outside of their community and by being clever & shrewd in their dealings with others. For most, by not paying to educate their children beyond a 6th - 8th grade level is a great savings to them as well.
Families are said to have, on average, 6 children. Couples marry young and their population doubles every 20 years. Remarkable! For a group which is, morally, quite strict and "shuns" or "excommunicates" known transgressors.
All of this has enabled them to expand their range, outside of Lancaster County, PA, into the rural areas of New York, Ohio, Michigan, Wisconsin, West Virginia, etc.
In the end, when considering the secular "Theory of Evolution" with it's concept of "survival of the fittest", we may ask: "Who is 'most fit" by showing themselves to have the greatest advantage, when it comes to both procreation and survival?".
Well! Enough said!
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Very nice and the first part was educational. Good job:)
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Airyhuang
very funny
Sat, February 28th, 2009 7:02amWork
whatever we do
or when to go
reading my novel
kids will go away
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Airyhuang:
Sat, February 28th, 2009 6:56pmThank you for reading, commenting and the compliment. Glad you liked it and thought it funny.
Thank you, as well, for contributing your own verse. For all the other Booksie readers.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.