Russian Furs

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

The opening paragraphs of a novel I'm trying to write... I don't want to give the plot away but it is set in a dystopian future and focuses on the struggle of accidental messiah against an oppressive system, told from the eyes of an obsessive follower (although narrative voices do change sometimes).

The main themes are: freedom, betrayal, love, insanity, oppression, slavery, adventure, hope, the human condition and loss

Chapter 1 (v.1) - Russian Furs

Submitted: August 24, 2012

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Submitted: August 24, 2012




Rusty machinery whirred and whips cracked in Old Lilley Factory at three o’clock on a Sunday afternoon. A distant foghorn could be heard even on the skinning floor, signalling a break for the workers. Collectively, a sigh of relief was issued, followed by a peculiarly ordered stampede to the soup queue in the canteen, five floors below.

A slight girl with a pointed, rat-like face remained at her post, gazing out of the grubby pane, seemingly absorbed by the darkness outside. Although her eyes, as black as the sky, were unfocused and dazed with memories, her hands kept on absentmindedly peeling flesh from the thick, fat-coated skin of a foreign beast.

Her delirious mind was little more than a haze of unadulterated confusion; I recall her bizarre tales of this time like nothing else. In later years she would become a dreamer, a miracle-worker and a lover. Eternal darkness came before her, at times consuming even her with its pitiless lust.

 In those days, when her eyes became unfocused and her gaze quick to blurred ideas, she could see the world; the mountains, the ancient forests, the great lakes and last of the free people, dwelling deep in the heart of the White Sea. She told me persecution cannot control those who are truly free, death cannot stop those who champion liberty.

The Floor Guard noticed her delay; with a swift movement the whip-bearing man crossed the factory floor, clamping his calloused hand on the girl’s shoulder. A harsh torch threw light onto her features; her hair shone in tones of the deepest blue and her skin gave off the unhealthy glow of someone who hadn’t slept properly in a while. Unsightly red welts covered her neck and her slender face appeared scarred, both with acne and a curious burn beside her left eye.

Fury poured from the girl, a fire of rage erupted from her arrested shoulder, creeping into every chasm of her body.

Barely wincing, she was thrown from her stool and onto the floor in an instant, her body collapsing onto the grit with a sickening thud. The steel torch smashed against the ground, merely inches from her nose, blinding her black eyes once again. Crimson beads began popping up in miniscule droplets where the gravel had scraped away her skin. The torch shone through the grey skin clinging to the little rocks, creating an eerie silhouette patterned with dying life.

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