Chapter 1: But I have a girlfriend...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 3

I'm 18, fresh out of high school, hot, and single, so what do you expect when a free-spirited gal from Miami comes to a new town in Cali full of hot unavailable guys. Okay so maybe they had every right to call me a slut, whore, or ho but they always do with girls like me without hearing our side of the story. And it seems like the slut never gets the guy at the end and my story is no different, well maybe a little but I'll let you decide...

Chapter One: (Cloe)

It all started with a guy. It always does with me anyways. I was on the bus, leaving my hometown, Miami, Fl for a much bigger city, San Francisco. It’s where my Aunt Reece lives. She said I could stay with her for a while after I had a falling out with my mother about her abusive husband, Ronald. He beat her everyday and was alcoholic. I had been hoping he would drink himself to death but that wish among many others hasn't been granted yet. My mom is a strong woman, its just when it comes to money and sex; she becomes blindsided.

Ronald has never hit me because of my older brother Thomas, who stopped by from time to time to check up on us and though he tried to beg mom to leave Ron, she kept making the same excuses: "But we have two kids together."-"I love him too much."-"Oh once he stops drinking, he won't do it anymore."- (oh and my personal fav.)"It’s my fault; I shouldn't have gotten in his way."

 Like that's any excuse to hit the mother of your kids. I thought with my mom being almost 48, her wisdom would kick in but it only seems to be getting worse.

Anyways back to Mr. Right Now and me. Well as I got on the bus, I was assigned to a seat close to the very back and I had to sit next to a very old looking man, who snored very loud. That's when the cutest guy I had ever seen in my life, well besides Jake Gyllenhaal and Justin Long, saw my frustration, and said from the last seat behind me, "Would you like to sit with me, I have an empty seat?"

He actually gulped in nervousness and I could tell he wasn’t at all cocky although from a glance you might think otherwise. I mean, from what I could see from the side, his body was nice, very nice. He had on a white beater, which showed off all his muscles. (Not to mention abs to die for.) I looked up at his face in embarrassment for he was watching me checking him out. I saw his features on his face were the softest part of his body. He had baby cheeks, which I found so irresistible, and his eyes were a light emerald. His hair was cropped short and looked newly cut.

 "I thought you'd never ask." I said to break the long silence. I sat down next to him and smelled his strong alluring scent. I had to use all my power not to sniff him down like one of those girls off the Bod commercials.

He smiled. "I'm Patrick." He held out his hand for me to take.
I shook it and I figured his name would be something like that though I was leaning towards a Matt or Jesse.


 He made a face. "C as in I see or C as in your name?"

"C as in that's all you’re getting out of my name. You're gonna have to earn my letters."

"Wow you really play hard to get." He joked.

 "Only with guys I find amazingly attractive."

He lifted up an eyebrow. "I wonder what you do with guys who are amazingly unattractive."

 "Nothing I will do with you."

"Don't you mean would do?" He asked.

I smirked. "No I mean will do."

 He blushed. "Okay so where you headed?" He suddenly tilted his head away from me, looking out the window. I guess to hide his puffy red cheeks.

"Next!" I wasn't ready to give out that kind of info yet; after all, we just met.

 He turned back towards me in shock. "What's wrong with that?"

 "I don't know you enough to answer that question. Don't you know a girl like me gets kidnapped or worse everyday for telling strangers shit like that?"

"If I was some kind of kidnapper or worse, don't you think you would have been kidnapped or dead by now."

 "Hey this is a 16 hour ride; you still have plenty of time to dump my body off somewhere. L."

"What?" He said looking at me in puzzlement.

"You earned another letter."

He paused for a moment and then replied, "So CL let me guess Claire?"



"Not even close." I laughed.

"Okay so if I keep being interesting will you give me more letters?" He asked.

 I just smiled wider and laid my head on his lap. He did not expect that at all for he jumped and I could tell he was a bit uncomfortable and a bit happy at the same time for suddenly there seemed to be a big bulge growing in his pants.

With a laugh I said, "OH!"

"O as in the next letter or O as in OH Shit?"

 "Both," I said and he leaned down to kiss me.

Submitted: March 03, 2010

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love it :]

Wed, March 3rd, 2010 3:47am


Thanks for reading and commenting and I will try to have more soon!

Thu, March 4th, 2010 3:09pm


WOW!! that was very good!!!

Wed, March 31st, 2010 5:25pm


Thanks but I'm not working on that anymore...I sorta got stuck on that story but maybe after I finish my current one, I can go back to it! Thanks again for reading and commenting!

Wed, March 31st, 2010 10:29am


ha good!

Wed, June 29th, 2011 4:16pm

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