Never broken.

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A young girl called Rose, taken from her hometown whilst walking her dog through the Forrest.
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Chapter 8 (v.1) - Never Broken

Submitted: March 29, 2013

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I woke up again whilst, it felt like I was being carried like before, I opened my eyes to see the man who carried me to the van in the first place, carrying me bridal style, now to somewhere different, It must've been late as my surroundings were pitch black in any direction I looked.

I tried to speak but shortly remembered that I had tape over my mouth, \"hush, we'll be there soon, just close your eyes and go back to sleeping\" a calm, caring voice whispered to me, it was the man who was carrying me, I closed my eyes and pretended to sleep, hoping that maybe they would say some important information that I could use?

\"What're you planning on doing with her then andy?\" Tim said, Andy? That was the name of the man who was now carrying me, he must've been the main man of this 'gang' as he was the one who took control, he was the one who had wanted to kidnap me, he is the one who will put me through hell, but most of all...he was the one who I seemed to favour.

\"Well I can see that you've already used her?\" Andy replied in an upset and angry tone. \"Oh God No, Andy she's still a virgin don't worry, I wouldn't take THAT away from you! You can have as much fun as you like with that, I was just teaching her a lesson was all\" Tim said in a joking but evil tone. I closed my eyes tighter, wishing I didn't hear that, what was he going to do with me? Whatever it was, I knew I wasn't leaving here with my virginity…or would I? I soon noticed that they hadn't bothered with tying my hands or feet together, they had no way to control me without any restraints.

I took this as my chance to escape as I quickly scrunched my hand into a fist and swung for Andy's face, I had hit him right in the jaw, upper cutting him, he immediately opened his arms and dropped me to the ground, I landed on my back and the pain was almost unbearable, but I couldn't give up now, I shot up onto my feet and ran as fat as I could, the pain in my ankle was slowing me down enormously as I had to do a limping run and hop to get away however the darkness had helped me resolve the problem with my speed as neither Tim or Andy could see me, or that's what I thought anyway.

I couldn't hear any footsteps chasing after me, although it was strange I carried on running for my life. It felt like I was running through long grass as I could feel the blades brushing past my exposed thigh, my freedom and happiness was short lived as I ran into what seemed to be a cold, metal, chain linked fence from the split millisecond that I felt it, the next thing I knew I could feel all 10,000 volts of electricity from the fence as it passed through my body within a second or 2.

I lay motionless on the floor with my feet just centimetres away from the electric fence caused by the shock it had had to my body, I hoped that they wouldn't find me as the long grass would hide me from their view, but it didn't, I heard both Tim and Andy now laughing at me and my stupidity in the distance.

\"She's a tough bitch she is!\" Tim said in a laughing tone before he and andy reached me, I received a kick to the face from Tim and a kick to the stomach and ribs from Andy, each kick made me want to just die on the spot but no, my time wasn't over yet as I felt a hand grab my hair and pull me to my feet shortly followed by the tape being ripped from my face in one quick motion, I let out a small whimper from the pain I was in at this moment in time, I then received a punch to the side of my face, then to my boobs, ribs and stomach, the abuse had left me bruised and bleeding as the hand started to drag me with it by my hair.

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