Chapter 1: Once upon a shooting star...

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

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I looked up at the clouds the other day, and smiled, I saw a beaming light, a bright sun ray, Then I realised, Your up there, shining down, to let us know your safe, Then a tear rolled down my cheek, Always and forever, in you I'll have faith. Then that very night, I saw a star shining oh-so-bright! I laughed, and cried, Even when I saw a shooting star and a normal one collide, Because, I know your up their Pete, flying with your wings, A sad yet brilliant treat!

Always in our hearts Pete, we miss you, and this Christmas will NOT be the same without you!

Submitted: December 11, 2010

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Joseph Dazo

Please turn it into poetry...nit a prose..^_^

I like it!

Sat, December 11th, 2010 5:56pm


Thank you

Sun, December 12th, 2010 12:57am


thank you, I appriciate it!

Mon, September 26th, 2011 6:00pm

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