Chapter 14: Kiss With A Fist Chapter:14

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Chapter Fourteen

“You really don’t like her do you?” Rianna laughed loudly during English, and my eyes flickered towards the table where Kieran and Sam were sat, whispering inaudible things.

“What makes you think that?” I frowned, although it was I admit, very true.

“Look at all her admirers,” She murmured softly, ignoring what I just asked. “It’s funny,”

“What is?” I frowned again, tearing my eyes away from the happy ex-lovers sitting in the far corner. They seemed to darn oblivious to my rather rude staring. Thankfully.

“Nothing. Just,” Rianna hesitated. “You hate Kieran, right? So how come, when another girl suddenly enters his life, be ex or not ex, you suddenly act all stormy and jealous…It’s like you’re enjoying the criticism you snap at him, but you’re afraid that someone else is going to hurt him also?” She shook her head.

While I contemplated this, I realised if what Rianna said was indeed true, then it must be because I either had feelings for Kieran, or that I still see him as a best friend, and have the urge to look out for him even when Im too busy yelling at him.

“Wow, look at you being all smart,” I muttered, doodling giant circles in the back page of my book.

“Tell me, what has she got that you haven’t?” Rianna pressed on, and I looked at the two again, thoughtfully.

“Blonde hair?” I offered lightly, but winced when I received a hefty smack from Rianna.

“Oh please, we both know that you like your dark hair,” She retorted following my eyes to the crowd of admirers which Sam had pulled in. Her blue eyes seems almost transparent, and it creeped me out.

“So, what does, or did she have which you don’t and want now?” Rianna prodded me on my shoulder.

The answer, was vaguely simple.

“Kieran,” I breathed, and instantly regretted it when in the corner of the my eye I saw Rianna’s eyes almost pop out of their sockets.

But I wasn’t interested or focusing on her opinion anymore. Instead, I found the eyes of mine locking with the eyes of vivid green from Kieran.

Even though it was majorly impossible, I hoped that somehow or another, he read a sorry in my fuzzy brown eyes, because I was. However, he tore his eyes away from mine when Sam started poking at him consistently. That bitch.

“What did you say?” Rianna gawped, and I turned around, and rolled my eyes.

“I never said anything,” I hastily told her.

“Oh. Must have been me then. You Sure?”


The rest of the lesson was somewhat easy going, but still I couldn’t face Kieran fully without cringing. When lunch hour hit, I sat by myself, since Rianna had to help Matty with his music lesson.  Ignoring her so called healthy natural balanced lunch, I took a plate and placed three slices of pizza and two cartons of juice on my tray.

It wasn’t like I was worried about my weight or anything, so I just literally grabbed anything edible off the food selection, walking straight past the fruit section near the end. I quickly walked to the far corner table, looking down at the floor.

“Hungry much?”

I gasped and looked up to see him looming over me rather scarily, his dark fringe hiding part of his green eyes.

“Maybe,” I sniffed, sitting down. I was suddenly afraid to eat, I didn’t want Kieran staring at me whist I was eating.

So gradually, after ignoring him, he got the idea and moved back to precious Sam.

When school finally ended after it’s long hours, I shifted from my seat and almost bolted out of the classroom and outside with joy. I was meeting Kieran by the gate since we both had different classes last.  My happiness was short-lived, however, when I focused on a couple kissing by the gate.

At first, I thought aww.

At a closer look, I realised the familiar dark, messy hair and her long blonde falling past her shoulders like pixie dust.

Kieran Haycroft was locking lips with Sammy, the two in a passionate embrace, his hands all over her hair, her body. I could hear her moan softly, and tug gently at the end strands of his hair.

I felt like I was going to be sick.

Submitted: December 27, 2010

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hehe serves her right for acting all bitchy and pushy towards him

Mon, December 27th, 2010 9:46am


ooh..thats interesting ;)
So you actually dont mind this? hmmm....
thanks for reading and posting,
orange box made me smile..

Mon, December 27th, 2010 4:15am


Nook not fair! Not supposed to happen no no no !

Mon, December 27th, 2010 11:26am


haha i know right? Life is so unfair at times...
Thanks for reading and commenting,

Mon, December 27th, 2010 4:14am


nO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please gd no! Why?!!!!!!!!! Update immediatley!

Mon, December 27th, 2010 12:00pm


ha, i might do actually. doezens of spare time on my hands. Who knows, i might finish writing the next chapter in time ;). i'll update you...

Mon, December 27th, 2010 4:13am


please keep me updatedd!!(:
love, leia

Mon, December 27th, 2010 12:16pm


of course!
Thank you for commenting and reading ;)

Mon, December 27th, 2010 4:20am


What the hell is wrong with him?! He cannot be kissing that bitch! I feel bad for Mel... Anyways, awesome chapie a usual, cna't wait for the next one!

Tue, December 28th, 2010 9:12pm


thank you!

Tue, December 28th, 2010 11:31pm


awsome chappie xx
but, why, why, why!! Kieran, what is wrong with you. You are such an idiot :L
-breedom- = bree+freedom

Wed, December 29th, 2010 3:35am


aha..i know right?

Tue, December 28th, 2010 11:29pm


NOOOOOOOOO! OMG, HE DIDN'T! I mean, she had it coming, but HE CAN'T DO THAT!
Okay, now I officially dislike Sammy. Grrrrr.
Poor Melanie, having to watch that! I'm feeling so bad while just reading, can't imagine what it would be to see it in HD and real life O.o
I'm SO clicking the next chapter! xx Paige

Fri, January 21st, 2011 11:53am


haha yeah..sorry but i had to! :)

Fri, January 21st, 2011 5:00am

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