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(Sorry for the long wait!! I had to sort out some thoughts before continuing this novel. Please enjoy and feel free to give me some comments. Comments help me to continue the novel. Thanks!)
‘You want me add more details to your face, Pretty Boy?’ Josh is taunting Troy intentionally!
‘Hey! Let’s go. No point getting detention on the first day.’ The playful-looking guy pulled Josh away with a firm hold on Josh’s arm. The rest of the gang take his lead. Amidst massive protests and struggling, Josh is dragged away. Phew! Lucky that coward is gone.
A hand hit my shoulder. Shit! Troy is STILL here!
‘Are you alright?’ His face is inching towards me! AAAHHH….I push him away.
‘Go away! I don’t need your help! Who do you think you are? Now everyone will think I am so WEAK!’ Did he see through my disguise??
‘Ok. I can understand. I shan’t bother you anymore.’ He walks away…
‘Wait...’ I whisper as he leaves. What is this guilt? Didn’t I always hate him?
‘WOAH!! Isn’t that so SWEET? So did Prince Charming recognize you?’ Jane exclaims after I filled her in with all the details during break time. Is that all she can say when her best friend is bullied?
‘Hello! You’re missing the whole point here. I am being bullied! Who cares whether that stupid Troy recognizes me or not?’ It’s a good thing I didn’t tell her about that guilt I’d felt earlier. What’s with that dejected look of his anyway? He must be trying to make me feel guilty intentionally!
‘Cool it girl! There’s no need to be so worked up. That Josh fellow is dead!’ Jane gives me her signature wink – Wicked!
‘OOoo… What’s THE plan?’ I smell revenge. Jane can be so vicious at times.
‘We’ll do it the classic way - make him fall in love then CRUSH his heart!’
‘Me of course! He wants to hunt me down anyway...’
‘Shh! Josh is coming in our direction.’ Speaking of the devil, here he comes. How perfect!
Submitted: January 28, 2009
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Sorry I couldn't read it when you told me to! I went to camp at school. School started two days ago - yes, CAMP ON THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL! I LOVE your story! Next chapter, next chapter, next chapter ... By the way, I LOVE THE PICTURE! So sweet!
Fri, January 30th, 2009 6:25am
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I'm so glad you love it! >.
Thu, January 29th, 2009 10:45pm
off to read more..
Mon, February 23rd, 2009 1:43am
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Thanks... SO sweet of you ^.^
Sun, February 22nd, 2009 6:21pm
awesome! moving on to the next chapter.....
Mon, February 23rd, 2009 5:56am
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Aww.. I'm glad you think so >.
Sun, February 22nd, 2009 10:11pm
*moves to next chapter* brilliant
Thu, February 26th, 2009 9:40pm
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Glad you're continuing... ^.^
Thu, February 26th, 2009 4:11pm
i love it. but you wrote in present tense, not past...
sorry, to keep bringing it up, but i just really want to help you.
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Oh dear... I thought i should stick to present tense. hmm... I'm a little confused.
Thu, February 26th, 2009 4:32pm
hahahaha serves the douch rite ^^
Fri, February 27th, 2009 12:22am
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Hahaha... ABSOLUTELY!
Thu, February 26th, 2009 4:32pm
i should have typed in from the ch.02 comment that i realized that Josh might juz be another big role character! my guess could have been right all along! hehe nice chapter, short though but tis worth reading every word! ^.^
Tue, March 3rd, 2009 9:05pm
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Haha... you're very fast at noticing. But maybe Josh may not be that big a role. I've been thinking of how to get around him. ^.^
Tue, March 3rd, 2009 3:59pm
No need 4 Jane'z plan im already working on 1 4 Mr.Josh Dumbass:P...excuse my language
Sat, March 7th, 2009 7:01pm
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LOL... I'm wondering wats your plan??
Sat, March 7th, 2009 11:30pm
you've got a problem in using past and present tenses. but that's alright.
this chapter is kinda shorter than the other ones.
onto the next chapter!
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Thanks!
Mon, March 9th, 2009 12:10am
DID COMMMENT ALREADY??? ANYWAY DONT BE MEAN HIM!!
Mon, March 9th, 2009 11:58pm
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Huh? Don't worry. Troy's not exactly mean.
Mon, March 9th, 2009 5:01pm
To Jane: I have a simpler method. *Shoots Josh* See? He's dead! *Cackles evilly* XD
Mon, June 1st, 2009 5:07am
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HAHAHA!!! You're funny!
Tue, June 2nd, 2009 11:45pmFacebook Comments
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Angelrose6
Nice...now off to the next chapter.
Wed, January 28th, 2009 9:01amAuthor
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Thanks for your lovely comment! ^.^
Wed, January 28th, 2009 1:04am