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Chapter 3 – A Raving Desire

It was indeed a satisfying meal, but I am still hungry. Jake thought to himself as he was resting in his room after their fabulous six course meal at Shangri-La hotel. The aroma of Mara’s hair still remained with him. It was a combination of honey and jasmine.

He wanted her, and he wanted her bad. Since he was 14 years old, all girls had been within his reach – all except Mara. She was his cousin, a forbidden fruit in his eyes. This made her even more attractive to Jake. After all, what could be more exciting and challenging than to eat a forbidden fruit?

This night, his desire for her had been stirred by her fragrance. The dress that flaunted her figure did much more. He was craving for her body, a fresh innocent body. He had already endured his need for the past week. Tonight shall be the night, Jake decided.

He sneaked out of his room to peep into his dad’s bedroom. Mother luck must be smiling at him. There was jazz music playing in his father’s bathroom. Ha… Dad must be enjoying his Jacuzzi now. The maid was too far downstairs to notice any noise upstairs.

Jake was quick to slip back into his room to take some cloth. Should I get some rope? No, Jake decided he wanted some resistance. After retrieving some tape, he left for Mara’s room. It was unlocked. He went in and locked the door behind. He caught a glimpse of her pocket watch lying on her desk beside the computer. What an opportunity! Jake took the watch from the table.

Now, where is she? Mara was bathing. How perfect! Jake thought to himself as he sat on her bed, waiting for his prey.


Submitted: March 31, 2009

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BettyRawrs

OMG NOOOOOO MARA LOOK OUT DONT GO OUT OF THE BATHROOM !!
JAKE YOU SUCH AN ASSHOLE GRRR HATE U!! BUT LOVE U BECAUSE U HANDSOME !! GRRR
LOVE IT~! KEEP UPDATING :)

Tue, March 31st, 2009 2:32pm

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Wow! I'm surprised! I didn't expect you to love him by this time. Though I can't dispute the fact that he's handsome explains a lot. =D

Tue, March 31st, 2009 5:36pm

crystal aqua

O_O NONONONONO!! -grabs the duct tape and tapes up her door- DON'T YOU DARE GO IN!

Tue, March 31st, 2009 2:34pm

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HAHA! Sorry... I didn't mean to laugh. The thought of you taping the door is pretty funny.

Tue, March 31st, 2009 5:33pm

yuu shindemura

well, what can i say...

*next chapter!*

Tue, March 31st, 2009 6:35pm

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YAY! Move on Yuu!

Tue, March 31st, 2009 5:22pm

AngelTears48

NO! MARA! DON'T GO TO YOUR ROOM! JAKE'S IN THERE! MAAAARRRRAAAAA!!!! 0_0 UH-OH...

Fri, April 3rd, 2009 11:12pm

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=O

Fri, April 3rd, 2009 6:01pm

JenDamsel

He's a BIG SOB! i hope nothing happens. :( that would be sad....
JENN

Wed, April 8th, 2009 7:17am

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Hmm... You'll know pretty soon! >.<

Wed, April 8th, 2009 12:34am

kitty98

That ASSHOLE he should get SHOT and then thrown to the sharks, but then maybe the sharks won't want to eat him. Maybe not even those animals that eat everything that's dead.

Fri, April 24th, 2009 1:27pm

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I think you're right! No sharks will wanna eat this jerk.

Fri, April 24th, 2009 5:28pm

jennoria

...... i wanna kill him! thats the worst thing that could EVER happen to a girl like Mara!!!! ahh!!! i hope she's smart enough to look in her room before she goes in there!!!!! nooo!!!!!!!! runnnn!!!!!!

.....good chapter!

movin' on!

*JeNnA*

Sat, April 25th, 2009 11:28pm

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I totally agree! I wanna kill Jake as well. >.<

Sun, April 26th, 2009 5:25pm

Kaela14

This is like a scary movie 0.0 don't walk outt of the bathroom!!

Fri, April 9th, 2010 1:52am

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=P

Wed, May 12th, 2010 4:39pm

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