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Chapter 5 – One Brutal Night

With one strong pull, her towel came off. Wow! She’s hotter than I’d expected. Jake thought to himself, feeling a surge in his heartbeat. The tightness in his pants was intensifying. He needed her.

Her legs were kicking at him though her arms were firmly locked with his hand. So she liked it violent huh? Jake used his legs to press against her flailing legs. His lips licked her breasts leaving a trail of saliva as he moved from one nipple to the other. They were young and pink, just right for him. He nibbled on them until both hardened. “I see your body is enjoying this.” Jake was pleased.

Her strong fade had crumbled by now. Mara was crying. If his lust for her was not built on physical grounds, he might stop. However, this was not the case. He buried himself in between her thighs to quench his thirst. Hmm… She’s sweet. Her body satisfied his taste buds. Her poor confused body was reacting to his advances, fuelling Jake’s hunger.

He got up for a short while to remove his pants. This sent panic up her spine. She scrambled to the floor, trying to reach for her bedroom door. But Jake had predicted her movements. He kicked his pants off and dragged her back to the bed. He scissor himself between her legs.

“Didn’t expect me to go commando? I can be faster than you think honey.” With his pounding need, Jake was no longer human. Her entire body was tensed. To his dissatisfaction, she shut her eyes tight.

“Come on Mara, I’ll stop if you open your eyes and look at me.” He coaxed her. It was a lie made to stroke Jake’s animalistic ego. Mara opened her eyes. Within an instant, the rigid and swollen male sexual part of him rammed right into her resisting flesh, causing it to tear and bleed.

Mara’s muffled cries escaped through her lips. She felt warm fluid gushing to fill her insides. Jake had finally finished off what he wanted. He had brutally dragged Mara from adolescence into womanhood.

She’s worth the wait, Jake thought to himself as he placed the watch on her desk and returned to his room.


Submitted: March 31, 2009

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jessieleigh24

whoa... veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery detailed. I never cope well when reading about rape, but that doesnt mean ur writing is bad, this is executed perfectly. Very well written. Very sad though.

Tue, March 31st, 2009 8:35am

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Thanks! This was my first attempt at writing rape. Your compliment was very encouraging! =D

Tue, March 31st, 2009 1:39am

crystal aqua

detailed..... JERK! HOW DARE YOU!!! -smacks him in the face-

Tue, March 31st, 2009 2:38pm

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He so deserves your smacking! Well done! That was a tough punch!

Tue, March 31st, 2009 5:31pm

BettyRawrs

OMGGGGGGGGGGGG NUUUU POOR MARA JAKE I HATE YOU I DONT LIEK YOU ANYMORE IT BAD TO FORCE A GIRL RAWRS~!
(LOVE YOU WRITING RAWRS~!)

Tue, March 31st, 2009 2:40pm

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Thank you Betty! I'm so happy you love my writing though its so harsh.

Tue, March 31st, 2009 5:29pm

yuu shindemura

jake's a saddist! lol!

crap that never has been much of a small writing, but every detail was almost to perfection~~~it is perfection! the way you place the rape scene is very described well!

Tue, March 31st, 2009 6:45pm

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Thanks so much Yuu! Your compliment means a lot to me. Perfection? Wow... I never thought of that of my writing. =D

Tue, March 31st, 2009 5:18pm

AngelTears48

Omigod! NoOoOoOoOoOoOoO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*cries* Poor Mara. Jake is such a ass!

Fri, April 3rd, 2009 11:15pm

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I cannot agree more! Jake is horrible.

Fri, April 3rd, 2009 5:57pm

JadeWhiteCloudGustafson

aww, thats so damn sad. Stupid son of a gun! Grr, he's a little pervert, like he had the knowledge to do that to his own flesh and blood! Stupid cunt! Grr, I hate HIM! Love the chapter, sad, very sad!

Tue, April 7th, 2009 11:07pm

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Yea... Jake is quite a hated character. >.<

Tue, April 7th, 2009 6:38pm

JenDamsel

omg, your descriptions are so good and your writing.
Excellent. i like your style of writing. Great work.
Jenn

Wed, April 8th, 2009 7:25am

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Aww... Thanks! I am so honoured! I'm happy you like my writing style! Yay! ^.^

Wed, April 8th, 2009 12:35am

BigSunShine

omg!!! poor mara!!! stupid hormonal stupid dorky cousin! stupid stupid person!!

Fri, April 17th, 2009 10:31am

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Yea... Mara is very pitiful. T.T

Fri, April 17th, 2009 4:34am

jennoria

...... now i rele wanna kill him! what does he mean tho? "She's worth the wait?"

another good chapter

*JeNnA*

Sat, April 25th, 2009 11:35pm

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He's a beast in general. What can I say? Mara had been his prey for a long time... >.<

Sun, April 26th, 2009 5:23pm

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