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I could feel the blood pounding in my ears as wind rushed pasted me. My heart was pounding in my chest as I saw the gleam of the needle. A scream escaped my lips. The only light in this place was the candle on the far table.
All the noise in the room was pounding against my ears. I could see faint marks on the ground beside me and puddles of blood. How many girls had been killed this way?  I could hear nails click against the floor boards. I wonder who will kill me first the rats or this person. My mind wandered off to how many people had sat in this chair just like me waiting for their final moments of life to end.
He drew out a knife and pressed it to my neck. The cold touch of the blade grazed my skin. I winced a little and to his pleasure he just smiled and licked the blood off the knife. He bent down to place his lips against my cheek. His lips circle my skin but never actually pressing down and kissing me.
This was torture. I had never been more hurt in my life. Tears began to stream down my face I could taste their saltiness. He was so tempting to me and I wanted to kiss him back so much. I wanted to trace my mouth over his and kiss him. I wanted to feel his lips press against my soft lips. I wanted to taste the sweetness of his mouth.
Stop that, you aren’t allow to think that way about him. Then his lips began to linger against mind and I could taste the blood that rested on his lips. I traced my lips against his almost ready to press down. He opened his mouth a little more and drove the needle into my lips. He pulled the needle tight through the first stitching and went onto the next
Each time he drove the needle deeper into my lips and every time he muffled out my screams with his hand. I could taste the blood on my lips warming my mouth. I could taste all the salt in my mouth almost throwing it back up. He tilted my head forcing me to shallow down my own blood.
He finished with the last stitch pulling it tight on my lips. The black thread in lips was thick and wouldn’t break. Blood dried on my lips. He traced his lips on mine once more teasing me with the thought that he would give me my first kiss.
He walked away from me blowing out the candle leaving me there to die.

Submitted: January 12, 2011

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Okay, I'll admit, I'm confused and SO want to know what's going on.
Love it!

Wed, January 12th, 2011 4:08pm


Lol you're see in the next chapter and sure. Thanks for reading. :)

Wed, January 12th, 2011 2:04pm


Crap that was really good... I think this is gunna be an awesome story, so plase kmu?! :) I like the way the writing is maroon as well, it makes it different as well as more interesting somehow! ;) Anyways, this is really good!

Sun, January 16th, 2011 9:24pm


Awh thank you:) And don't worry I will. Lol yeah I think it adds a nice effect, lol its red actually. ;)

Sun, January 16th, 2011 2:23pm


Woaahhh this is really good :) It got a very scary vibe to it lol :) of to the next chap :)

Wed, March 9th, 2011 11:00am


Thank you! Hehe thats what I was going for the scary vibe MWAHAHAHA!

Wed, March 9th, 2011 8:05am


This is really good! Not only have you written it really well but you've made the reader really curious to make sure they read more! I'm away to read the next part :)

Thu, May 12th, 2011 9:11am


Ah thanks! :) Yeah I try my best. Okie dokie.

Thu, May 12th, 2011 6:12pm


Wow, wow wow! This was amazing! I love it! Just tell me what letter you want and your on the team! Welcome!

Fri, September 16th, 2011 12:45am


Thanks! :) Alrightie got it I'll get over to you're page right away and tell you what team I want.

Thu, September 15th, 2011 10:39pm

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