Book by: Gepikwhereis
Genre: Mystery and Crime
adventure, fight, crime, blood, gang, encounter, robber, gepikwhereis
Author Chapter Note
Chapter Content - ver.1
Submitted: February 10, 2012
Chapter Content - ver.1
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Hello people, know you lack any information concerning me, and that's why I'm introducing myself -- My parents named me, a long time ago, Baldovik, meaning 'the straight child' : A name, which I strongly believe, strides well with my personality.
My profession is robbing, something not many may fancy, but ,to tell you a shimmering truth, it actually is a pretty fair job.
My family was wealthy and enjoyed sky-high status. And it cost my parents nearly nothing to admit me to Cliffwall Bended School - the most grandest and prestigious school in the entire state of Gobrania. I never hated school and thought it was a rich mine of knowledge and wisdom. I relished going there. I was mesmerized by the wonders the universe held in itself. Loved animals too, not because they were cute and fluffy, of course, but it was their amazing abilites which charmed me.
Everyone in the family knitted dreams of me becoming a doctor or a lawyer someday. Like I would. I wanted to forge my own fortune. My sole ambition was of becoming a successful robber - A goal I achieved. Unlike others, I held positive views towards robbing and thievery, and perceived that the loot obtained was but a well - deserved salary for the tough work done.
I faked my death and fled from home when I was 20. I felt I had had enough education and wanted to cut myself loose from the tight bondage; and I can bet a thousand Meons at my family members still thinking that I was drowned in the fast flowing river Bogomot. I did not want to shatter their hopes and imaginations, but I never told them to dream, did I? It was their fault, afterall!
You call this comment a novel???? More coming, in another format, or what?
Alright, alright. This problem shall be sorted out soon.
A fine introduction of the character, but why dont you make it a little more (mystic) about this guy after all?
After all, he seem like a interesting guy -- maybe a little weird?
I'm glad you've found this weird. It's what I meant it to be. And hey, there is a lot about Baldovik you'll be knowing in future chapters. Thanks for reading . :-)
WOW! A fantastic beginning! And a wonderful writing style, very witty and detailed. And Baldovik seems like an interesting character! Hope you'll post more soon. :)
Yea, the next chapter will be posted soon!
Thanks for reading. :-)
Really good! :DDDDD AMAZING! I like it! Baldovik is a pretty cool name, and he seems like an AWESOME protoganist! ;) KMU!
Hey, mate, thanks for reading! And I'll surely KYU. ;-)
So, I come to read your novel and I like it VERY MUCH!!
But, you said the next chapters are coming soon, and you said that in February and now's April! So..?
Anyway, Baldovik is a very cool name(Is it Russian?). And the character is really interesting. It was very well written because you made me feel like Baldovik is writing the chapter! Not you.
Good Luck! ~Ye$er~
Thanks a lot!!! Yeah, i said i will be updating this soon and i know exactly what will happen in the next chappie, but i am at the moment rather busy like writing another novel not posted here. But i promise the next thing i do after another update of Witch's plot is to complete the ch 2 of this and post it. Baldovik is not really Russian (sounds like them though). This tale occurs in some fictional country.
Thanks once more. :-)
Good, but very short.
Thanks! I post a longer chappie soon. :)
Certainly this is an interesting background. I liked your writing style. You could have more of an extended novel synopsis to give a strong exposition. Ok though. Carry on!!!!!
Yeah, i'will make this longer when I edit it. Thanks for reading. :-)
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