Sweet Whimsical Me

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something I thought of while looking out my backyard window!

Sweet Whimsical Me

 

As I gaze out my window, I happily see

Gorgeous nature show, true bliss melody 

 

The brightest green grass, flowers so divine

I laugh at a cat trying to get on the clothesline

 

Yes , everything looks happy, even my tree decor here

Whimsical me hangs shiny, colorful strips of cheer

 

I watch the wind blow the streamers, it's like a wave

Oh Vincey, this is fun, pure silliness you often crave 

 

Well, I do recycle plastic and ribbons that sparkle and shine

It's unique Christmas in my sunny yard,happiness, art is all mine

 

It maybe silly but it brings a certain glitter, warmth and youthful cheer in my life, I adore spring, summer wonderland!!


Submitted: May 25, 2012

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Ian Dawn

you are the ying to my yang, so light and breezy

Sat, May 26th, 2012 12:20am

Basilia

its a happy poem once again Vincey! lovely and its like a calm cool breeze in the evenings. so sweet.

Sat, May 26th, 2012 7:27am

brucek

yep, that would be a sight to see. christmas in the spring! what a cheery piece!

Sat, May 26th, 2012 1:06pm

Murnit

Nicely done x

Sat, May 26th, 2012 4:53pm

Jennifer Lee

i like the poem overall and i liked how you rhymed. The rhyming fir nicely but your sentences just seemed a little choppy and not really complete to me

Sat, May 26th, 2012 7:28pm

DREAM182

very good, I liked it. :)

Sun, May 27th, 2012 10:54am

BITSxOFxKINKY

what a sweet smily happy poem i enjoyed reading this and it made me smile

Tue, May 29th, 2012 2:11pm

Shweta

That cat must be silly! :D Breezy Vincey wrote another feather light happy poem. I loved this. :)

Wed, May 30th, 2012 5:33pm

Ekeuhie

Sweet whimsical you!!! Divine flower wreaths to deck your hair and garlands to adorn your poems? You are one great Canadian poet and a huge beautiful Justin fan.

Fri, June 1st, 2012 1:41pm

Ekeuhie

Fri, June 1st, 2012 1:44pm

cougarose

A feel-good poem about a feel-good season. I kinda felt like I was there with you watching the streamers gently waving in the wind. I got tickled envisioning that cat climbing onto the clothes line. Cute poem... I like it very much.

~ cougarose

Thu, June 7th, 2012 6:14pm

the dead poet

oh what a great poem I like thecheer of this poem really britens someones day....... Great job...... Take care

Sun, June 24th, 2012 12:43pm

Wu Lang

Hi Vincey, this poem light's up my gloomy day...You are so great when writing a happy, catchy poem...you expressed your feelings really good...well done.

Tue, June 26th, 2012 8:48am

autumnenergy

This is great! I love it! -autmnenergy

Fri, July 27th, 2012 10:00pm

Lanre Sumon

Fantastic job, great. Love the way you express your self, calm poet made me smile ????

Mon, September 22nd, 2014 12:59am

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