*My Suicide Note (Hypothetical)*

Kurlz Basheld

Oh gosh, that was so sad! I seriously am tearing up... :,(

Jenna Masonn

This has all crossed my mind. The world is fucked up. That's not changing. I saw one of the tags was "emo"

I hate that word so much. Please don't use it.

CAT WILD

oh my gosh.....im in tears... no one deserves to go through stuff like that
:(

headoverheels91

it's sad :(

Nocturnal Writer

WOW, this is deep. you have amazing talent.

Raining Skittles

This is so sad! Please don't ever commit suicide! You have all Odis here on booksie! And everyone would be sad even if they outcast you, they would realize what they were missing in their lives! Keep writing boy, because you have serious talent!

The moon & stars

First off Gideon you sound like an arrogant bastard. Shut up. Second this note both made me cry and and laugh. Laugh because of the whole stepmom thing. Cry well obviously this isn't supposed to be a good thing. But I feel very strongly about people who commit suicide. I have lost people who didn't choose to die. My friend didn't get to go to highschool because of a drunk driver and I still cry for her. I will admit though that I have often thought what it would be like if I were gone. The pain everyone would go through. But I'm not willing to put them through that. You show your true strength when you push past all the bullshit of life and survive.

sweeterTHANcherries

This is so sad. Im tearing up. No one should feel this way. And your not a nobody people care. I almost lost 2 close friends to suicide and I've thought about it and they felt the same way in that letter but I care if they died other of our friends care if they die. I know it's hypothetical but never try to kill yourself people care trust me! Sorry for a bit of a rant. I just hate how many teens kill themselves these days and I'm sick of it. Some people could have been saved but weren't and I don't want that to happen to anyone else. Srry again for the rant explaining my rant. P.s. Gideon sounds like a pompous asshole.

Fromaster123

OMG This is so sad, i actually started to have tear build up in my eyes reading this. I hope you NEVER EVER commit suicide you can write all about it but NEVER NEVER NEVER DO IT!!!

hatemydarknature

I'd notice you're gone

I rely on your poems so much i check in every few days to see if you've written something new

chelseabear1

Aw :( this is really sad, i love your writing. But im sure your not a screw up, im highly sure your a great guy. Dont let assholes get you down, they only do it cuz they think its making them look good when really its not. So fuck them all and be yourself your amazing :D

Amethyst Rose

I say I love it and I don't mean it in the "Wow i love that you wanna die!" Because thats not true at all! i've attempted suicide at least 3 times and each time I wrote a letter like this and I kept it safe when all three times have failed. So I can relate to this. My step-mom can fuck herself too ;) that's the cause of all my pain and hopefully you can get through it too. :)

nid

I like the way you describe the people as selfish and crude..thats the real fact..I agree God is just a silent person who picks favorites..you must be feeling very bad when you wrote this..and why are all people bothering about grammer in a suicide note..thats funny..you have written your emotions and please people, see what the writer has actually written..i.e. what the writer has in mind when he wrote..feel that..and not how he writes--the style and grammer..take care..

The Jester of Punishment

I much rather enjoy the darkness of this. For this is bitter-sweetness when it comes to our death. Or as I see it. And in a way I know how you feel. It my step dad's falter that I am as I am now. That and my other family members. I've been ridding the train of my sanity never wanting to be free. I keep a journal of every poem, short story, letter of my darkness. You have inspired me to maybe post my dark dark stuff on my profile. Thanks. Again I love this letter. You'll have to read my letter to my blade if I get it up.

-TJOP-

Violet dusk justice finn darrot

I nearly cried-trust me, that's some compliment. I'm not in your exact position but near enough. I've written a million of those, nearly fulfilled tne promise, but somehow have always been brought around. I'm treated like shit because I'm short and goth/emo/whateverelsetheyfuckingthinkof all the time. I get you totally. I really liked it, and I loved the stepmom thing! God, if only I could say a few things to her... I'm babbling, but, loved it!=^)>~

bunnai88844

You probably don't care what I think but i'll tell ya anyway, your real good and to me reading your novels, short stories and poetry I gather a little piece of what it would be like to walk in your shoes and your way of thinking. In my eyes what you write is a reflection of your thoughts and helps people get to know you. fucked up no, everyone good goes through something tragic. loves

BlackMyst

Hey, don't ever change anything about yourself. That's what makes you, you. And this poem is what I'm talkin about. Good work.