One little thing

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

You'd never think that one little thing could ruin everything.
Well, might Jenny and Luke.
"Your going to let this one little thing ruin all we have"He yelled
"I'm not going to be here when that ONE LITTLE THING kills you"She yelled right back.
To lovers ripped apart by thing happening in everyday life, more dangerous than you though, huh?

Chapter 1 (v.1) - PROLOGUE

Submitted: March 18, 2010

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Submitted: March 18, 2010





“Ugh, Why won't he come say hello”I said exasperated.

“Maybe he doesn't recognize you”My best friend Coral said back sensibly.

“Or maybe I'm not cool enough for him to ditch his friends”I replied back. I'm so annoyed, my old best friend, who I hadn't talked to in a year, won't even come say hi to me. I mean Jesus Christ, I know he sees me, he's been looking at me for the past five minutes.

He looked at me again, I raised my eyebrows, daring him to come down and say hey. I know your thinking 'wow what a drama queen, who cares if he doesn't say hi'. You see, we used to have the biggest crushes on each other.

“Come on Jenny, it's time to go”Coral said. I'm totally over him now though, since I haven't seen him in so long.

I walked toward her “COMING”I yelled.

When I got home, I got on my space and sent Luke a message:
OK then. Don't say Hi to meet at the track meet, you turd.

I turned of my computer.

(Still flash back)

The next day when I got home from school(they're all in 8th grade during the flashback) I had a message:

JENNY!!I'm really sorry, I didn't even see you, where were you sitting.

(their convo)

J:I was sitting with your mom for a couple minutes, and then with coral your schools side.



L:JENNY, you got HOT!

J: o gee thanks Andrew

L:I meant it in a good way:D


L:You look so...different


L:Wow, well come to the next track meet and Ill give you a huge bear hug:), I have to go bye

J:o yay:)Bye:)

So me and Luke met at every track meet, and we became close again. Finally, half way through the year he popped the question, woah, wait that came out wrong, what I meant to say was he asked me out! I said yes, if only I knew what I had gotten myself into to.


PLease comment, Iwould adore you if you did.

I'm trying to find pictures that match the characters, Next chapter it's real life and they're in 10th grade

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