Chapter 1: The Dream Preview

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Comments: 3

Fear ran through my bones as I fell down the stairs my heart quickened with every step I fell into. My hands covered my mouth. There in the floor beside the wall was a girl. Her blood was scattered everywhere her clothes, her body. There was a knife struck right through her heart. My limbs were frozen, my lungs empty, fresh her blood playing in my vision. Someone was grabbing hold of my neck trying to kill me. I couldn’t move no it was too much. Hands held my arms and legs my throat.

There was blackness surrounding me. My body was stiff as a rock. I remember those red eyes those red eyes that haunted my dreams. It was an utter nightmare. It dragged me into the darkness I wanted to scream but the hands around my throat didn’t help. There was a noise- a gruesome noise that felt uneasy. There was a pressure in my body that made every muscle in my body hurt. As if a knife was running over and over in my body. I try to get away, to get free but it was of no use.

The hands gripped tightly on me.it dragged me and dragged me till my head hit something hard and sinister. A sharp pain went through my leg. My mind is numb, my mouth is clogged up it was running out of oxygen. Whites flashes appeared in my vision I couldn’t see I couldn’t recall the future. It got closer to my face fear was seen through my eyes my eyes getting wide I wanted to shake my head to cry to tell it to get away. That smell was gruesome it was toxic. That moment that I was paralyzed was a severe pain I would never forget. Those red eyes..


Submitted: October 09, 2012

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Dean Talbot

A good start but a bit to vague yet. I would need to read more to see where you are taking to story to make an opinion on the start as a whole. Definitely exciting so far, just needs to be reread and edited a bit.

Tue, October 9th, 2012 8:44pm

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Okay thank you i will do that

Fri, October 19th, 2012 12:51pm

ForgottenWhispers

I think this would work really well as a prologue. I'm really interested to know what happens next, but also what's already happened. What you've got here is really good and I just want to read the rest if it now! x

Tue, October 9th, 2012 9:19pm

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thank you :D

Thu, October 11th, 2012 2:56pm

itsminniemousex

aww thanks guys that is a big help :D

Tue, October 9th, 2012 10:05pm

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