Chapter 1: She whispers; "Words are so allusive."

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 240
Comments: 2

I feel the love seep from my forehead at gunpoint.


Submitted: May 05, 2009

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Wolven Instinct

Short, sweet, and to the point. Though morbid. For you even.

Tue, May 5th, 2009 4:39am

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It's a metaphorical gun silly. *ruffles hair*

Tue, May 5th, 2009 5:42am

Me Against The World

LOL, I was reading your comment back to Irwin above, and I started thinking of 'The Cell Block Tango' from Chicago. It was hilarious.

Anyways, I think you have my kind of writers block, random brilliant lines that don't fit into poetry. It's the most frustrating thing. I've invested in writing prose instead, but I don't like it very much.

I'm focused on writing for my friend right now, she's mah best, and we always try to out do eachother on Birthdays. Believe me, this is time consuming. I'll still update Isaiah and Ryan though. XP

Wow, that was a long comment for such a short peice.

Short, but great write.

Lids?

Tue, May 5th, 2009 3:38pm

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OMG!!!! *hugs*
I'm so glad you got that! Why I'm glad... I'm not sure, but I am. I doubt anyone else would.
Also, thanks for the comment, the longer the better, you know that. Most of the lines that will be published under this title don't make any sense, and don't even inspire any feeling. They just are, and I think that's as much as anything could hope to be.

Tue, May 5th, 2009 3:09pm

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