The light danced off her black hair,
full of wonder and inoccent care.
She watched the world through hopeful eyes,
but it was all a terrible disguise.
Under her pretty white dress,
she is nothing but a nervous mess.
Remembering what she has done,
but her troubles have only just begun.
She waits in a room,
for impending doom.
Slowly going mad,
but very very glad.
She never must deal with prying eyes,
or hear the hipocrites hateful lies.
Her mind fills with bloody regret,
never able to ever forget.
Submitted: November 03, 2012
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very good for your fist poem, keep going and you will do great...congrats
Sat, November 3rd, 2012 2:58am
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Thank you for reading it and I plan on putting more up
Sat, November 3rd, 2012 8:49am
Thnk you guys for reading it :)
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boobearlover
This was very good, wonderful job . I like all the emotion you put into this and all the wording and hwere you decied to place it was very good. You have a good use of imagry in this as well .
Sat, November 3rd, 2012 2:00amAuthor
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Thank you so much! It's my first and I am going to write something later...
Sat, November 3rd, 2012 8:52am