Chapter 14: I'm Done (Josh's POV)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 333
Comments: 6

Chapter 14: JOSH'S POINT OF VIEW!!!!!!

Chloee's apartment stared at me from behind my windshield. I really didn't want to come here but I had to do this for the sake of me and Nicole.

I heard my phone vibrating in my pocket, and I knew exactly who it was.

Chloee already knew I was here...she was, obviously, watching from the window.

The txt read: "Hey! Come on up, Sexy ;) the door's unlocked."

I groaned as I stepped out of my mustang. I was dreading this so bad...

The apartments Chloee lived in were semi-fancy...the only thing everybody hated was: they had no elevadors!!

I had to walk up four flights of stairs just to get to her level...I stood in front of her door hestitaing whether or not I should knock.

I could have just ran away. She would have never known...then again, maybe she would since she was watching me!

Before I could knock, Chloee threw the door opened and greeted me with a big, wet kiss on the mouth.

She was wearing a tight, black halter-top with lime-green skinny jeans. I had to admit, she looked hot...but the thought quickly vanished when I started thinking about Nicole.

In her puerta rican accent she said, "C'mon baby! Don't just stand there." With that, she hauled me inside her door and shut it behind me.

Her apartment had always appeared spacious to me. Maybe because she was the only person on this level. Her rich daddy gave it to for her 16th birthday!

We both sat down on her love seat and she immediately tried making out with me, again!

I yelled, "Chloee, chill with the kisses, Jesus!"

She gave me a pouty expression and asked, "Are you ok, Joshy-boo?"

Joshy-boo? Really? What is up with the stupid nicknames?!

I took her hand and said, "Chloee I think we should break up..."

She stared at me blankly for a moment but then started giggling.

"Ha! That's a good one, Joshy! Now, what's really wrong with you?"

I stared blankly at her for a minute.Do I really have to spell it out for her?I thought to myself.

"Chloee. I'm being serious...I'm done."

She was sitting really close to me until I had said that. She jumped up and put her hands on her hips and started blessing me out.

"You cannot do this to me! I have been nothing but good to fact, I even let you take advantage of me! Yeah, you only loved me for the sex didn't you?"

I, then, stood up and calmly said, "Chloee, stop making up lies. I've known for the past month that you and Malcolm have been screwing each other behind my back! Oh, and by the way out of all the things I loved about you...the sex was definatelynotone of them. Goodbye Chloee."

I started making my way to the door when Chloee yelled out, "Josh, if you walk out that door right now, you will never find another girlfriend like me again!

Pausing at the door, I said, "Really? Because I've already found another and you know what Chloee? I think she's a whole lot sexier than you and I'm glad she's nothing like you!"

Chloee tried to stamper out a response but I wasn't listening anymore. I was walking out the of the building whistling and smiling, because now me and Nicole could officially be together!

Submitted: March 14, 2013

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Take the World by Fire

Hellz to the yea! You tell that bitch JOSHY POO!!!! HAHAHAHAH XD

I loved when he's all like "yea and sex was NOT one of the reasons I was with you" or something like that. Ha! In your face Chloe!!!!


I loved this chappy in his perspective! I"m excited to read another one already ! XD

Thu, March 14th, 2013 5:18pm


Glad you liked it! Love your comments by the way :)

Thu, March 14th, 2013 11:42am



Hehe, he just verbally bitch slapped her! lol

Thu, March 14th, 2013 6:21pm


That's right! lol :)

Thu, March 14th, 2013 11:43am



Ooh yeh!!!!!!!! GO JOSH!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D.. that was awesome >>>off to read the next chappie XD

Thu, March 14th, 2013 10:10pm


Hahaha Great! Glad you liked the different POV!

Fri, March 15th, 2013 7:39am



Josh you fantastic man you! You tell that bitch what's what!!!

Fri, March 15th, 2013 11:08am


hahaha great comment! :)

Fri, March 15th, 2013 7:40am


Romance Novel all the way


Wed, April 10th, 2013 1:04am


She sure did! Lol

Wed, April 10th, 2013 5:42am



Wow! I kinda felt sorry for Chloee there, I don't know why, cos she IS a bitch, but randomly i did

Sat, September 21st, 2013 10:50pm


Lol you weren't the only one

Sat, September 21st, 2013 4:00pm