Chapter 1: Trapped Without You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Reads: 358
Comments: 2

Colours, both bland and bold incase me here. Painted on by him, they keep me, scared, trapped. Trapped, like a mat screwed to the floor. I am a mat, he the screws. He holds me from escaping, from speaking out. No, what he keeps me from is much more than that. He keeps me from living. I rush my steps, afraid that at any moment my feet would be screwed into the floor if they linger. I keep to myself, afraid he would just mock me if he knew the real girl bound by him in this place. I am trapped in this narrow room, his binding walls. This feeling makes my crazy knowing what I am. I am trapped.

Submitted: September 03, 2010

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janedoe97 part 2! :)

Sat, September 4th, 2010 8:00am


I like it but I'm not sure why you would put this into 5 parts when it's already so short?

I would love to read more of this, I like the way you express it, it has a bitter tinge to it.

Ps. The link didn't take me to part 2...

Sun, September 5th, 2010 12:19pm


thanks :) the point of having the 5 parts (arranged in 5 chapters) is because in the first, it's a man. the second is a girl, the third is a boy, the fourth explains kind of a abandonment, and the final part (or the final chapter) is just the end to it all. I still need to post the fifth part.

Sun, September 5th, 2010 5:27am

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