With my eyes blackend from this sleep deprivation
Pondering over my mind and it's war and peace situation,
I just need you here..here by my side
At least until the skies clear and these waves finally subside,
I have this cringing feeling that i'm a ship just short of land
With smiles and possibilities if I could get my toes into the sand,
With my feet hovering over the ground and my head in the clouds
I hope you can see me in this light..I hope I can make you proud
Even if thomas asks to see my hands at the gate
When this time arises and I have to bare a grin to seal my fate,
I know that I won't sell myself short
I know it's what i'm looking for
This anxiety to me..is overbearing..
Please help me..
I notice in the sidewalks the cracks resemble a timeline
Between the ants struggling to eat I can relate as if it were mine,
Trying to make the best out of a callused point of view
I feel I was once an optimist then my vision went askew,
I've been beating the same path of body deforming destruction
I wish I could have stopped myself, I wish life came with instructions,
So I'll sit here and collect and try not to be bitter
If my tears were trash they'd catch in the wind and get caught up in the litter..
Submitted: June 09, 2012
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Sorry. I meant to say good job.
Sat, June 9th, 2012 10:00pm
Thank you so much :]
Sat, June 9th, 2012 10:09pm
The second verse shows you are an artist. The visuals play the fiddle of someone who understands from a creative standpoint. A musician, a dancer, or a person who can draw ansd paint like me.
Tue, June 12th, 2012 1:27am
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thanks man i really appreciate it!
god this is absolutely amazing...i want and need your talent.
keep it up i would love too see more
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A nice poem! You wrote this very well. Expressed deep and meaningful feelings. Godd job.
Sat, June 9th, 2012 9:59pm